四级提纲作文：Make Our Cities Greener

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四级提纲作文：Make Our Cities Greener

急急急！！！悬赏一篇英语作文，120--130词。。。作文题目：城市绿化。提纲：1状况 2好处 3怎样实现。。。

写一篇美化城市的作文，英语写作文。

急急急急急！！！！关于城市建设 英语作文 120个词

一、四级提纲作文：Make Our Cities Greener

Make Our Cities Greener

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Make Our Cities Greener. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1．城市绿化的现状；

2．城市绿化的好处（如清洁空气、美化城市、改善气候，等等）；

3．怎样才能实现城市绿化？

Remember to write your composition neatly.

【范文】

Make Our Cities Greener

In recent years, many trees and flowers have been planted in and around all the cities of China. Some cities have already changed their faces. They look green now. But most cities haven’t changed much. There are fewer trees along the streets, let alone lawns①. We are facing a great task to make our cities greener.

It is very important to make our cities greener. Trees and flowers are beneficial to our health because they absorb carbon-dioxide② and produce oxygen. They also can improve the micro-climate③ of the cities, making hot weather cool. In addition, they can beautify④ our cities, and turn them into lovely gardens.

How can we make our cities greener? First, we should plant more trees and flowers. Besides, we should carefully look after the planted trees and flowers. No one should be allowed to tread⑤ on grass, break off branches or pluck⑥ flowers. Of course, we should also learn gardening⑦ so as to protect the trees and flowers we have planted. In order to make our cities greener, March 12 is fixed by our country as a day for planting trees. Cities belong to us all. Let’s love them and make them greener.

【注释】

①lawn：草坪

②carbon-dioxide：二氧化碳

③micro-climate：局部气候；小型气候

④beautify：美化

⑤tread：踩；踏

⑥pluck：折

⑦gardening：园艺业

【点评】

本文是一篇根据汉语提纲展开的议论文。

全文团结“城市绿化”这个中心展开。在第一段，作者根据提纲中第一点的提示指出我国现在的绿化现状令人担扰，从而作出结论：我们面临着绿化这个严重问题。在第二段，作者再根据提纲中第二点的提示，从气候环境和城市美化两个方面论述了绿化的益处。此段中，作者运用 also, In addition等连接词语使语句过渡自然。在第三段中，作者用设问开头，再用First, Besides, Of course等词语进行逐步回答。最后又讲到我国的一项基本政策。这些都是实现城市绿化、美化家园的步骤。

纵观全文，语言流畅，过渡自然。论点正确，论据有理，论证有力。

参考文献：英语作文高分必背丛书：大学英语四级写作/李华田主编，武汉大学出版社，2005

一、急急急！！！悬赏一篇英语作文，120--130词。。。作文题目：城市绿化。提纲：1状况 2好处 3怎样实现。。。

Low carbon abatement green life
With the development of science and technology, most people live a well-off life, besides can assure to eat and drink, and private cars and more gradually up. The life of people more affluent. But we know, the earth is only one, scientists have yet to find suitable for human life the second planet. Therefore we should also protect the only home. I always thought that only the automobile exhaust, coal burning these will emit carbon dioxide, have never thought life everywhere have weak "carbon" forces in the us and infringement to our survival homes - the earth. Before, I always put the lights opened last night to Ming dynasty, water from the evening to drip to tomorrow morning, refrigerator with the mess of things. So, waste water and waste electricity...
Now, I heard the city in the propaganda advocate low carbon life, I gradually some understand. I started a "low carbon life". Low carbon life just a kind of attitude, not ability, we should from electricity, water saving, section, solar term carbon, oil-saving this small start, low carbon life is that we should establish green lifestyle, as long as we go to action, can close to low carbon life, even can achieve low carbon standards of living. Remember last summer, the weather is very hot, my family and I "hide" at home to watch TV. Dad left sofa, walk to air conditioning for air conditioning, find the remote control, then "spluttered in several bottom". Later go by sofa sits down, I'm curious asked his father, "daddy, you just stem what ah?" Dad said: "have no stem what!" I don't believe, then, and shod walk to air conditioning, picked up the air conditioning remote control, look at, ah, originally dad put air conditioning transferred to 24 degrees Celsius, I said to her mother, "mom, you tell dad said that he put the air conditioning off, if we take the air conditioning off, the fan, open, it can reduce exhaust emissions how!" Remember still once, I want to buy a story book, evening we to go to the bookstore. When going out, my mother said to me: "in a short while to the bookstore car where?" I hurriedly said to her mother, "no no! If car go, no place to park, the most important is to drive to would spew much carbon which!" Mother listened to my voice, accompany me to go to the bookstore.
Maybe you do not know, the elevator as building one of the products of high frequency used in low carbon emissions targets, reduce the energy consumption of the elevator use links to building energy efficiency way. For example a has 5000 elevators city, each elevator use energy feedback system, the city of year in 240 million degrees, electricity quantity can reduce emissions of carbon dioxide 20800 tons. So, little sit elevator, many stairs is very important also. Everyone knows that water is the source of life, the life we can live without water. Cook, wash dishes, wash clothes all need water. Once I always thought that the water is bottomless, you see, home open faucet, water hua hua out and continuously ah. Then a sudden stop water that my didn't carry water, this bottom can't cook. Mother go to the supermarket to buy back the mineral and bread, "against" had a good meal. Night also cannot face wash feet, such bed still really feel a bit weird. That day I saw on TV news in China's western region is always joking drought, the elder of rain, the crops will perish. They also wanted to limit the water for living, queuing to get water Wells is often the case. I know the water precious, daddy told me "water is already scarce resources, saving water is low carbon life". My father and I work out "water-saving solution" : washing a face of water can wash feet, washed your feet of water can also flush the toilet water, life can be recycled. This is my winter vacation of another "low carbon" life experience. Save every drop, each a kilowatt-hour, Can walk to school, work, not by car, As far as possible by bus travel, less open fuel automobile. From our side bit small start, an environmental small guards, actually very simple. Please remember, anytime, anywhere as to reduce life and routine when consumed energy, you is "low carbon gens". We face is deteriorating environment, will soon dry resources. But as long as everybody for earth and developed a force, treat our earth, earth will make our life more beautiful!
呼呼，累死我了，给点分吧。。。。。。。。

二、写一篇美化城市的作文，英语写作文。

Make Our Cities btter
　　Many things have been done and great progress has been made in makeing our cities better and more beautifu in recent years. Many trees have been planted and much care has been taken of the planted trees.
　　We can benefit much from making our cities greener. First, trees absorb carbon dioxide which is harmful, but produce oxygen which is essential to human beings. Secondly, with trees all around, our cities will look more beautiful. Thirdly, trees can improve the climate of the cities, making it neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter.
　　Since we can get so much benefit from making our cities better, we should spare no effort to do so. We should plant even more trees and take even better care of them while they are growing. Besides, we should not cut down trees any more. In a word, we should do everything to add to the greenization of our cities.

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三、急急急急急！！！！关于城市建设 英语作文 120个词

Make Our Cities Green

With industries and business developing quickly, the number of trees in many big cities has dramatically reduces. Efforts are being made to prevent people from cutting more trees. But a lot of trees are being destroyed by people who have never thought of the importance of green plants.

Making cities greener has many advantages. First, it can make our air cleaner. Some researchers have proved that trees can reduce the amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere through absorption. Second, it can make our cities more beautiful. With trees and flowers everywhere, living conditions can be improved. Finally, it can produce timber----an effective way to solve the problems of limited supply of natural resources.

Making our cities greener requires nationwide efforts. People in every field should not only know about the importance of keeping the quality of urban environment, but also take common action to plant more trees and flowers so as to improve our living conditions.

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