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The school is our paradise, is everybody places of learning, early in the morningto hear the alarm, I was unable to hold oneself back to immediately to our schoolinto the classroom to start, colorful day.
In the morning of Chinese maths lesson, I look forward to most is of course - the school you!7a64e58685e5aeb9336 Who said the class will only play? It is the best time, let the mindmood adjustment, I like lying in the window, he closed eyes, listen to all the school sound, for example: the teacher's curses, students scream, and the chirping of the birds, insects and other... Sometimes I will use my window of the soul, to observe the surrounding scenery, will find that our school beauty!
After a morning of suffering, my belly rings hunger symphony, finally can be put into the arms of the nutritional lunch! Color, flavor and taste of the meat, so that Ieat, I had to throw them away, well - delicious food makes me Liuxiang cheek teeth and memorable. In order to reserve the afternoon nap is of courseindispensable strength, ah! The entire campus is finally quiet down, everyoneimmersed in the dream! Hush ~ ~.
Finally to the class the long-awaited sports class, the teacher took us to the playground happily to warm up and running, and then we started the most exciting moment, dodge ball, girls scream continuously, make originally quiet playground, into a scream of the haunted house.
Time is like water, the school bell rings, and I followed the team out of thecampus, after a wonderful day school life.
授人以鱼不如授人以渔,以下是写作方法:
作文技巧
一、第一眼看整体
主要看字体是否工整,卷面是否清洁,不涂不抹;字数不多不少(少则"残废",多则"臃肿")。
布局是否合理(头大尾长身子小、段少字多密麻麻)头尾短小精悍。开头结尾段字数均应控制在百字以内,否则,头大尾长身子小,比例失调,影响美观。段落稍微多一点。600-800字分4-6段为宜。
选好文体。一般说来,如果写记叙文,运用小标题、日记体、分镜头式等片断组合法写成的文章清爽直观、疏密有致、思路清晰、层次分明,能给人整体美感的效果,易引起阅卷者的兴趣。
二、第二眼看审题
角度的切入是否得当、立意是否准确鲜明。让阅卷人比较容易地明白你的观点:
1、 精心打造标题。
《人生自古谁无死,留取诚信照汗青》、《患者吴诚信的就诊报告》、《问君哪得暖如许,为有爱心活力来》、《理想海阔凭鱼跃,选择天高任鸟飞》等。其中"诚信"、"爱心"、"选择"就是切题的字眼。
2.巧妙运用题记。
3.用心写好首尾。因为开头和结尾也是老师寻找文章观点的"战略要地",所以,如果写议论文,最好开头用言简意丰的语言开门见山地摆出观点,结尾以韵味无穷的语言呼应观点。另外,还可在文中反复紧扣文眼。
三、第三眼看选材
主要看材料e799bee5baa6e4b893e5b19e333是否切题、丰富、新颖——若选材不能说明观点,则属牵强附会;若材料单调,则说理空洞无力;若材料平庸,则落入俗套。
我的网友(My Net Friend)
I was only nine years old when I learnt how to use a computer. My mother is my first teacher. I know how to type, how to copy a file, and how to visit a web site on the internet. One day, mom was not at home.
I turned on the computer and began to learn how to chat on net. The first one I met there was a boy called tom. He greeted me politely. When he knew that I was only a 9-year-old girl, and almost knew nothing about chatting on net, he started showing me how to use the chatting tools, how to download, and how to send e-mails. I learnt a lot from him.
石器时代的人们(Stone Age People)
Millions of years ago, people lived in caves. They had fire, which gave them heat and light. They eat raw meat. It was time for lunch. The father was very hungry.
He was eating some raw meat. He gave the boy some raw meat. The boy threw the raw meat into the fire. The father was very angry. He said, “You are a bad boy! Eat this meat.” the father gave it to the boy. The boy tasted the meat. It tasted nice. He ate the cooked meat. He said, “I like this meat. it tastes good.” after that, the stone age family always cooked their food on the fire
修理电视机(repairing a TV set)
On the eve of spring festival, people were making dumplings while watching TV. But suddenly our TV set didn't work. Father was so anxious that he went to uncle lees. He felt glad to help and came with some tools.
除夕之夜,家家都在高兴地包饺子看电e69da5e887aa7a64331视。突然,我们家的电视坏了。这可急坏了爸爸,他急忙请隔壁的李叔叔帮忙。李叔叔欣然应允。
After a moment he fixed the set. Our whole families were so pleased that we asked him to taste some dumplings of ours.
他带着工具,不一会儿就把电视机修好了。我们全家都很高兴,热情地请他吃饺子。
上学路上(on the way to school)
This morning, my father took me to school by bike. I sat at the back of the bike, eating a banana. After I ate it up, I threw the skin onto the street randomly.
今天早晨,爸爸骑车带我去上学。我坐在后车座上,吃着香蕉。吃完后,我顺手将香蕉皮扔到了街上。
No sooner had I done this than I realized that I had done something bad to our environment. And maybe someone would step on it and tumble over. I must pick it up. Thinking of these, I asked father to stop. I jumped off the bike and ran back to pick up the banana skin and threw it into a roadside dustbin. Seeing this, father praised me and I felt very happy.
我马上意识到我的所作所为破坏了我们的环境,或许有人会踩在上面而跌倒,我必须把它拾起来。想到这些,我让爸爸停车。我跳下自行车,跑回去拾起香蕉皮,并扔到了路边的垃圾箱里。看到这些,爸爸表扬了我。我感到很高兴。
In future I will protect the surroundings more consciously and think more about others.
将来我要更自觉地保护周围的环境,更多地为他人着想。
网上英语聊天(chat in English on the internet)
I am greatly interested in chatting on the net, especially in English. I still remembered the first time when I logged on the legend web site and met a girl called "orange”.
我非常喜欢网上聊天,尤其是英语聊天。我仍然记得第一次登录联想网站并在“英语沙龙”聊天室遇见“橘”姑娘的情景。我们谈了一些有趣的话题。
We chatted about some interesting topics. I think I can practice my English well this way.
我想我可以通过这一方法练习英语。
我的新牙刷(my new toothbrush)
oh! my god. my toothbrush was broken last sunday. i couldn't brush my teeth. so i went shopping with my mother. there were so many tooth brushes.
finally we chose a blue one. there is a blue bird in it. it made in guangzhou. it is ten yuan. it's too expensive. but it is so beautiful. and i like it very much. so we bought it. my mother said that it is good for my teeth. then we went home. i can brush my teeth now. how happy i am!
父亲给我的礼物
When I was young,my father ,who always taught me how to be a true man,told me that it is essential to be tolerant in your life whatever happens.
And that remains the most valuable present he gave me,I think To be tolerant, I need to keep calm when great trouble lies in front of me,however difficult it is to overcome it; To be tolerant ,I need to resist the temptation of all kinds of the outside world,even if it is so attractive; To be torlerant, I need to pull myself(控制自己情绪) in times of extreme sorrows and joys, no matter how they affect me.
Summer Camp
On Saturday, we went camping, with our teachers. First we pitched the tent. then our older brothers and older sisters played game with us. At noon, we all had a delicious lunch followed by a barbecue for dinner. At night, we had bonfire and sang and danced. We didn’t sleep until 10:20 at night. But some of the boys were so noisy we couldn't fall alseep. I only slept for three hours. the next morning, everybody woke up very early. After exercising in the morning, we all went to see the small pigs. On the way there, we saw a lot of geese. At 10:00, we went back to eat ice cream. It was so cold. then, we all played games together. We ate lunch at 12:00. In the afternoon, we played musical instruments and sang. After that, camp was over. We had a lot of fun at the summer camp. I am looking forward o going to another summer camp soon.
Reading Is a Good Hobby
With development of science and technology, new knowledge comes every day. If you stop learning even for a day,you will be lost. Reading is a good way to help you keep in touch with the outside world. Read widely and you'll be rich in knowledge. Reading is also a good way to relax yourself. You can get a lot of fun in the books. A good book is a good friend to comfort you when you are unhappy. So long as you have a good book at hand, you'll never feel lonely. Every valuable book will open a new world before you.
A piano player(我的理想)
What do I want to do when I’m older? Someone wants to be a doctor. Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport. Someone wants to be a writer and to make the writing. Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children.
I like playing the piano and I good at it. So I want to become a piano player. Play the piano is very interesting. And you can learn something of music. Piano can make you like music. A lot of musician and singer are love playing piano.
I play the piano when I’m ten years old. Now I’m in grand five. I hope when I’m sixteen years old , I can become grand eight. I’ll be harder and harder to practise.
Become a piano play is a hard job. But I believe I can do it.
只要格式上套着课本上的zhidao文章,没有语法错误,字写的漂亮,间距控制的好.只要这样写,即使句式再简单,专在单一,20分满分十五六分就有了,如果要接近满分,只需要套一些万能巨型,让文章高大属上一些,就可以了.
一定要采纳,谢谢🙏