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第二节 书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：
1、 自我介绍；
2、 祝贺苏琳生日；
3、 感谢工作人员；
4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意：1、词数100左右；
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3、开头语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【写作要点】
1. 自我介绍
2. 信息来源
3. 祝贺生日
4. 感谢照顾
5. 索取照片
6. 合适的结尾e79fa5e98193e59b9ee7ad94339
【参考范文】
One Possible Version
Dear Sir/ Madam,
Greetings from Chian!
I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website. Now she’s going to be there. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【易错提醒】有的考生可能会不认真审题而漏掉要点：信息的来源以及合适的结尾。文章书信开头有了，但是结尾没有给出，有时候是给出结尾的。因此要注意审题，提炼要点。
【学科网备考提示】
1、确定文章体裁、格式、结构及常用时态。书信以应用文形式出现，时态以一般现在时或一般将来时为主。
2、依据题目列出内容要点、分清文章层次。只写与要求一致的内容，文章层次应结合问题特点来安排。在确定内容时，应使用自己最熟悉的英语词汇或句型来表述。
孩子们的负担知多年来已成热门话题，但家长的负担却很少受到关注，尤其是来自他们孩子的关注。这幅图片向我们展示了一个感人的时刻。一个小女孩去拥抱她正在工作的妈妈。在意识到妈妈工作了一天一定很累时，小女孩道帮妈妈卸下了肩上的包。妈妈回应着弯下身子向女儿表示她的喜悦和感激之情。这一切使我想起了我的妈妈。她做了她力所能及的一切来满足我。但是我回由于完全沉浸在学习中，很少在意妈妈的需要和感受，并且总是认为好好学习是报答妈妈的唯一途径。现在我知道了我也能做一点力所能及的事情，如洗衣、打扫房间、或者至少自己准备早餐来帮妈妈分担日常负担。这幅图使我相信答做一个好女儿比做一个好学生更重要。
http://wenku.baidu.com/view/c81970dbd15abe23482f4d99.html
Dear Sir/Madam,
This application comes to you from one of your Summer Course students. My name is Lihua, from China. I got the syllabus yesterday, and the courses are quite interesting.
However, some points are still making me confused. Here are two problems I’ve got:
1. Where can I get the textbooks? Can I borrow them from the school library instead of buying the brand new ones?
2. My oral English is imperfect, so do I have some extra courses to practice it, or maybe we have English Corner?
About our meeting time, I hope this Friday, 3pm. would be great for you.
You could also contact me by email or phone.
Email:
Phone:12345678
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Sir/Madam,
My full name is Li Hua, a student of summer courses here.
I am writing this letter to report some of the problems and puzzles I encountered when learning the course of Business English. My puzzle is that I don’t know whether this course mainly teaches English or teaches in English. In other words, how could I balance between business knowledge and English itself?
I hope you could give me some directions so that I can work it out without too much difficulty. I am available at 8 am on Wednesday. Would that be OK? Please do feel free to contact me by e-mail or telephone at any time.
My email address is
My phone number is 12345678.
Look forward to your reply!e79fa5e98193e58685e5aeb9333
Yours,
Lihua