返回目录：范文示例
思写作参考书，我选哪本 在雅思考试当中最让人头疼的可能就是写作了，见过太多的从4.5到5.5挣扎很多次却依然距离6分很遥远的同学，惋惜之余，也在想什么原因导致了这些同学的悲催现状呢。 辅导资料我们7a686964616fe4b893e5b19e332并不缺，市面上各种写作指导不下30种。写作理论体系也不缺，什么单边式，双边式，让步式，不一而足。对于一个7分的文章应该是什 么样，大家也是各说各的。虽然有我们有统一的评分标准的指导，但是什么人的解读最有效呢?聪明的同学已经猜到了，当然是雅思考官。考官的标准才是我们唯一 需要遵循的标准。而考官的标准去哪里找呢?毫无疑问，答案在剑桥雅思真题的范文。 我们现在用的最多的复习资料就是剑桥雅思的真题。大作文写作有一个明显的特点，那就是虽然话题多样，提问形式多变，但是常考的话题也就那么几个，从剑桥4-到剑桥8，包括A类和G类文章在内，共有30个题目，基本涉及到了过半数的雅思写作话题了。对于小作文，常见的四种图形--线图，饼图，柱图，饼图--以及两种不常见的图形--地图和流程图--每一种类型在剑桥真题当中都有所涉及。 因而，同学们再准备写作的过程当中首先要做的就是要将剑桥真题当真的9分考官范文做到熟读成诵，熟悉其写作
那题目的观点你是同意还是不同意先？我个人来讲是不同意的，现在娱乐比以前多了，只是方式不一知样而已。
第一段，摆观点，不同意
第二段，不同意的原因123（娱乐只是为了放道松，与creative无关，随着科技的发展，娱乐变得多样化，简单化和生活化，摆点实例支持观点，像online game, online chat, online reading，当然也有很多户外活动）
第三段，让步讨论对方观点，诚然科技发展也有其弊端专，网络的发达使人宁可花更多时间在电脑面前而不是出去社交（科技发达的弊端有属很多事例的，沉迷游戏不利于身心发展等等）
第四段，再次表达自己的观点是不同意的，虽然有弊端，但是当今人们娱乐的选择比以前多多了，大家有更多的选择适合自己的方式去娱乐，而市场的需求反而让新的娱乐more creative，所以说less creative 是不成立的。
第五段，总结
楼主e79fa5e98193e4b893e5b19e330，你好，我有雅思大作文的各类范文的哦，分享给你吧~
英文标题：Sport today is turning into a business, with many companies involved and ever growing prize money for the sportsmen. Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?
范文：
Sport today is turning into a business, with many companies involved and ever growing prize money for the sportsmen. Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?
These days, with growing numbers of companies being involved and with the increase of prize for sportsmen, the traditional sports have been developed into a business. When some people doubt the change of the essence of sports, I, however, would claim this trend to be a positive development for the following reasons.
Taking sports as a business increases people’s attention and concern on sports, and thus can gain more benefits in the duration. To run the business more successfully, publicity of the sports will be conducted more vigorously, which will surely attract more people to take part in. In addition, this indicates that, as other economic activities, investment in sports can also generate profits, so that more money can be put into this field to promote its development.
This encourages more gifted people to participate in sports to develop it to a higher level. Attracted by being the focus of so many people and encouraged by the high prize through winning in sports, more geniuses in this field can be stimulated to display their talent. Also, to achieve the aim to realize their dreams in life, competitions for the winners will be fiercer, which helps to tap their potential to the most.
Admittedly, being too commercialized in sports may, in the meanwhile, generate some problems and even deviate it from the essence to fortify people’s health. However, it is the degree of control in the business, rather than the matter of taking it as a business itself. The principle of business in seeking profits will surely guide it to develop healthily to free us of the worries.
To sum up, developing sports as a business not only benefit more people but also develop sports itself. With a clear understanding of this and continual effort in the field, sports can bring us more benefits in the future.
翻译的话，在我上传的这个文档里面有的哦~