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范文的题目是：电视对文化的影响是积极的还是消极的？
Television has had asignificant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent do youthink it has positively or negatively affected cultural development?
Few people in this world are living a life without the accompaniment oftelevision, which then generates tremendous influence on the lifestyle and cultureof society. Although there may be some negative impacts, I would claim theeffect of television positive to the development of cultures.
TV broadcasting enables the cultures to be spread widely to attract moreattention from the public. Released in the programs at various intervals, viadifferent TV channels, information about certain culture is known to the massand thus its influence is strengthened. Also, from news reports to promotion ofactivities, TV programs can introduce, in a variety of angles, the details ofthe culture. The clearer understanding people have on it, the more concern theywill pay.
Supervised and tested by the public through the reports on television,cultures will be developed more promisingly. With more cultures being shown onTV, comparison and contrast is done among people, which forces the culture toretain its essence to maintain identity and discard its dregs to attractcontinual attention. Besides, to spread further and influence more around theworld, the culture will be better developed in the right direction.
Admittedly, the broadcasting of TV programs will surely bring aboutcompetition among cultures and even lead to conflicts. However, it is just thiskind of atmosphere that is helpful for the cultures to develop further. Afterall, in this fast changing world, there is no reason to allow those that cannotstand competition or cannot adapt to the trend of society to continue theirinfluence on people.
To sum up, television has positive impact on culturaldevelopment. With a clear understanding of this and proper measures taken inguidance, cultures will enjoy unprecedented prosperity than ever.
第一步：审题。很多同学在这一步和大作文犯的毛病一样，百提笔就写，完全不管题的要求是什么。现在A类写作，除流程图外，基本所有题目都要求你对数据进行选择和有效的比较。换句话说就是选择有特度征的数据（比如最大值最小值），然后将他们拿来比较。
第二步：找趋势，找特征。Task1的图表基本分为知有时间和没有时间两种。有时间的就有趋势，是上升还是下降，要写道清楚。没有时间的就是找特征数值。
第三步：确定结构。较高质量的小作文应为四段。第一段Intro， 第二段 overview， 第三段 body 1， 第四段body 2。当然第二段的专内容也可以放在后面作为summary来写，不过个人不建议这样。而且铁律是overview和summary只能有一个，不能两个都写。
第四步属：动笔写。
2018年6月30日雅思小作文e799bee5baa6e997aee7ad94e59b9ee7ad94333范文：柱状图
2018年6月30日场的雅思小作文真题范文已出，小作文类型：柱状图。本期小作文题目是：The chart below shows the rate of males and females who were overweight in Australia from 1980 to 2010.
雅思小作文类型：Bar chart
雅思小作文范文解析
看到小作文，我们首先要定位3W(when, where, what),该柱状图描述的时间是过去的4个年份，跨度30年。地点为澳洲。内容为超重男女的比例。该题目内容一目了然，男性比率总高于女性，所以思路解答上可以男女分开，描述各自的变化趋势。范文共计8句话。
雅思小作文范文
The bar chart compares the gender distribution of overweight men and women in Australia in four separate years 1980, 1990, 2000 and 2010.
Across all the years, it is apparent that the proportion of males who were obese was significantly higher than that of their female counterparts. Initially, almost one half (48%) of the male tended to be excessively fat. This number rose merely by 4% in the following decade before shooting up and arriving at its peak at 69% in 2000. Subsequently, there was a marginally downward trend, ending up with 65%.
Similarly, the rate of females also showed an upward in the first two decades in spite of a relatively lower proportion (28%) occupied in 1980. This figure had consistently increased to 49% until 2000 and had remained stable by the end of the period.
In brief, the chart shows that although overweight population continued to be male-dominated in Australia over the past few decades,the gender gap had ultimately narrowed.
范文原创自小站老师Alice. Hua
字数 162 words
雅思小作文高分表达
compares the gender distribution rose merely
in four separate years shooting up and arriving at its peak at
it is apparent that a marginally downward trend
was significantly higher than Had consistently increased
female counterparts had remained stable