雅思写作大作文高分范文：如何解决青少年犯罪问题

Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crime. Some believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
雅思写作题目讲解：
对立双方题型属于大作文的“主流题型”，这一大类分为三小类。就“对想法的限制程度”上来说，这三小类有所区别。广大同学对此应有所理解，以此来使得自己的作文做到好的“task response”。这三小类具体的差别，大家可以看该博客另一篇博文，里面有细致的讲解。
该雅思写作题目的对立双方：
一方： 相关措施对减少社会犯罪率有效的理由
另一方：相关措施几乎对减少社会犯罪率无效的理由
(注意加粗斜体部分)
今天考试的雅思写作题目的特点是对想法有比较大的限制，双方的理由必须围绕着一个社会的犯罪率是否因此减少，如果同学们的idea没能往这个点靠拢，那这个 idea就跑题了。做个假设：如果同学们将“政府应该加大惩罚的力度”，“媒体应该让更多人知道一些罪犯是如何设置骗局”，这两个idea作为一方的理 由，这两个想法无e69da5e6ba907a686964616f330法做到很好的切题。因为该题首先考的不是应该采取哪些方式，而是为什么这些方式有效，或者无效!
能够做到“切题”的idea：(同学们仔细对比下面的两个理由同上述两个稍跑题理由的区别)
一方： 相关措施能够减少社会犯罪率的理由
1. 政府采取的严厉的惩罚能够震慑潜在的罪犯
2. 媒体对于常见诈骗方式的报道防止更多的人受骗
另一方：相关措施几乎不能减少社会犯罪率的理由
1. 犯罪率高很大程度上是一个社会的经济程度发达程度，财富分配，贫富差距来决定的，上述的理由无法根本上，长远的解决问题。
下面给大家提供一方观点的其中一个理由的具体行文：
社会的犯罪率部分取决于政府对待罪犯的严厉程度，一个理性的潜在的罪犯将停止对社会的伤害，当他意识到自己可能付出的代价大大超过了可能带来的利益。 一个将抢劫犯处以终身监禁的社会所面临的犯罪问题少于其他的更加仁慈社会。
The crime rate of a society is partly determined by the level to which a criminal is penalized. Potential criminals, provided rational enough, will stop their act at the thought that the possible price they might pay would greatly outweigh the possible benefit they may acquire. And the effect of harsher punishment in deterring criminals can also be evidenced by the fact that a society treating a robber with lifelong sentence faces fewer crime problems than its counterparts with more merciful measures.
With a rapid increase of crime, more citizens are scared of aggressive acts all over the world. As to whether more measures can be taken to stop crime, there is an endless debate. From my personal view, although more actions cannot fully guarantee the security of the whole society, it is not the reason for which people can surrender to violence.
随着犯罪率的快速上升，越来越多的公民害怕世界各地的挑衅行为。至于是否可以采取更多措施制止犯罪，这是一场无休止的辩论。在我个人看来，虽然更多的行动不能完全保证整个社会的安全，但这并不是人们可以屈服于暴力的原因。
Clearly, actions such as enacting more strict laws and legislation can effectively curb the frequency of crime. Fearing punishment is usually the mature of humans, so when they are informed of the consequence of committing crimes, they are more prone to stop doing anti-social acts. In addition, providing more education contributes to raise people’s safety awareness and consequently prevents crime. As the Internet prevails information about laws and legislation are more achievable, and thus there is a possibility that people are given more opportunities to learn how to distinguish right from wrong.
很明显，诸如制定更严格的法律和立法等行动可以有效地遏制犯罪的发生频率。害怕惩罚通常是人类的成熟，所以当他们被告知犯罪的后果时，他们更倾向于停止做反社会行为。此外，提供更多的教育有助于提高人们的安全意识，从而预防犯罪。随着互联网的普及，有关法律和立法的信息更容易实现，因此，人们有可能获得更多机会来学习如何分清是非。
However, feasible measures are still not a panacea to the establishment of a completely safe society. If governments fail to guarantee a basic living standard for their citizens, crime rate will hardly be controlled. It is widely believed that a decent job and sufficient disposable income can reduce the possibility of committing socially unacceptable behaviour. The insecurity of society can also be attributed to the fact that it is less possible for governments to eradicate all factors leading to crime. Illegal drugs and alcohol are more accessible than before. People may have to commit crimes in order to get these items.
然而，切实可行的措施仍然不是建立一个完全安全的社会的万能药。如果政府不能保证公民的基本生活水平，犯罪率就很难控制。人们普遍认为，一份体面的工作和充足的可支配收入可以减少做出社会上无法接受的行为的可能性。社会的不安全也可以归因于这样一个事实，即政府不太可能根除导致犯罪的所有因素。非法毒品和酒精比以前更容易获得。为了得到这些东西e799bee5baa6e997aee7ad94e58685e5aeb9362，人们可能不得不犯罪。
To conclude, reasonable actions including making severe policies and offering educations are of great help to control criminal events. However, they may still not be able to ensure a secure living environment for people if fundamental needs of materials cannot be fulfilled.
总之，合理的行动包括制定严厉的政策和提供教育，对控制犯罪事件有很大帮助。然而，如果不能满足物质的基本需求，他们可能仍然无法确保人们的安全居住环境。

Nowadays, an ever-INCREASING rate of juvenile delinquency has attracted widespread attention. Youth, variety and high-tech are marked indications of this crime. In the following discussion, I will analyse its reasons and propose my solutions.
As far as I am concerned, there are an array of complicated factors attributed to such phenomenon. First and foremost, excessive media such as Internet ,TV and films are to blame for getting our children access to the bloodY and violent contents. Lacking capacity to distinguish good and evil, they are more likely to imitate the violence and various crimes exposed to them(,) without a recognition that they will regret in the future. Another considerable reason should be mentioned is that teachers and parents only focus on the youth's academic results rather than their interest and psychological problems. As we always give priority to exam scores, those who (cannot) perform well tend to get TOO frustrated to study and take a hostile attitude toWARD ALL OF society. Some of them even commit a crime as a revenge to society when they are /always/FOREVER BEING/ criticized by their teachers and parents.
Considering some of them being in contravention of rules and laws unconsciously, we should not press a charge on them simply or they will stray from right path again in the future. A ""Special care ""DEpartment should be set up in order to enable them to pick up their optimism toWARD the world(,) and their own goals in their lives.With appropriate guidance, they can learn job skills and useful knowledge. Most importantly, effective plans should be implemented to accelerate the reform of education and augment stern supervision on media.
To conclude, we are confronted with an EVER-increasing juvenile delinquency. Thus, joint effort of schools, households and government are needed to afford a healthy and suitable environment for our teenager's growth.
To conclude, we are confronted with an increasing juvenile delinquency. Thus, joint effort of schools, households and government are needed to afford a healthy and suitable environment for our teenager's growth.