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nahaAnother reason why .....(凑字数，但不可滥用) is that....(有利于写长句) What is also worth noticing is that.... 值得一提的是___________________。 There is another factor that deserves some words here. 还有另外一个很重要的原因。 A more essential factor why.... Is that ________ 的更为重要的原因是____________。 A further reason why,,,, is that..... ________的更深层次的原因是____________。 In addition..此外，再者 Moving on to wider themes,_______ 展开来说，_________________________。 The second thing that must be taken into consideration is that... 第二个原因也很重要(值得考虑)，亦即__________。 Likewise(同样), common sense tells us that... 同样，___________，这是众所周知的。 The third but very important reason is that... 第三个(尽管不是很重要)原因是______________。 The third, not the last is that, 第三个原因是___________。 The last factor to be taken seriously is... 第三个重要原因是_______________。 Finally, moreover, last but not least, furthermore. As the proverb goes: "every coin has its two sides", ....is no exception. 俗语有云："万事万物都有两面性。" ________也不例外。 Every thing has a good side and a bad side, and ....is no exception. 万事万物有其两面性，而________也是如此。 The discussion as to whether the ... is a blessing or a curse arouses most people's interests. __________是好坏利弊问题引起了很多人的兴趣。 ..plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world. ______ 尤为重要而引起当今社会的关注。 There comes a question: is it a blessing or a curse. 问题是：____是福是祸? There is no denying that every thing has one more face and ... is no exception. 不可否认，每一件事物都有其两面性，其实，______也不例外。 Every thing in the world has its own two sides. Without exception, A has both advantages and disadvantages. 任何事情都有两面性，A也不例外，有其优势和劣势(利与弊)。 ....undoubtedly plays an increasing significant role in modern life. 不容置疑，_______在现代生活中不断显示出e799bee5baa6e79fa5e98193e78988e69d83333起重要性。 With the development of the society, ... is increasingly important. 随着社会的发展，_______变得越来越重要。 The merits of this is obvious... 其好处显而易见。来源：考试大 As we know, ... bring many benefits and convenience to people. 众所周知，_______ 为我们的生活带来很多好处。 There are no less than three advantages in .. as rendered below. 如下所示，_______ 至少有三种好处。 Despite the advantages ... has, some people claim, we shall not lose sight of its adverse effects on... 尽管_____有些益处(优势)，有些人则认为，我们不能忽略了其对______的负面影响。 However, like anything else,... has more than one face. 然而，象其他任何事物一样，______ 还有其它的方面。 1.适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I （比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ）举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus， its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that … 3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。（考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等）比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen one’’s competitive edge代替enhance one’’s competitiveness（提高某物竞争力） 下面举一篇我南京六级班上一位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。 Computer and I By Simmy I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. exceedingly 替换 very thrilling 替换 exciting sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth. google 替换 search an army of 替换 a lot of The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure! The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情； Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular Coincident with … 非常地道的词汇，表达＂与…一致＂的意思，替换 With … Advancement 替换 development Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into Current ( currently )替换 now Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth. Growing individuals 替换 more and more people It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的 For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email. For a start 替换 To begin with We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法 our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动 等等啊，我也要考4级，都没有功夫背了，模板是弄了不少。。
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对比选择模板二：
① quite a few/ a lot of people believe/ takeit for granted that 某人观点或做法。②even some people 进一e69da5e6ba90e799bee5baa6e79fa5e98193333步说明该观点或做法.③However， I hold the entirely differentview./ I don’t approve/favor 这种观点或做法./ I don’t think 该观点或做法的不当之处.
//①(Nowadays /Inrecent years,)一种现象.②Some 一些人的看法或做法，while others 另一些的看法或做法. ③ As to me, Iprefer to /am in favor of the former/latter(opinion) (提出观点段)
④ Of course, 我不赞同观点的合理性.⑤ For example, 支持其合理性的例子、(Also,)进一步阐述其合理性.⑥ But it doesn’t mean/ it is worthnoting that 我不赞同观点的不足.⑦From my point of view/ In my view, 我的不同观点.(反面论证段)
⑧The following reasons can accountfor/ contribute to /support my argument.⑨ First, 理由一.⑩ A goodexample to illustrate is 支持理由一的例子/进一步说明理由一.11Second,理由二. 12 To conclude/From the foregoing, 重申观点.
第二类：问题解决型
1. 现在很多年轻人缺乏拼搏精神
2. 导致这一问题的原因是什么
3. 大学生应该加强拼搏精神
问题解决型模板1
描述问题段
Nowadays / In recent years, there are (still)/ have been quite (a)few people 或其他涉及人群who 做法、看法./ (still) more and more/(still) quite a few/ few people (still) 或其他涉及人群的做法/看法. However /Indeed, 这种做法/看法的不当之处/危害性/表现. Even worse/ besides， 进一步说明该做法/看法的危害/表现.
// Nowadays/ In recent years, 问题is /are becoming / have/ hasbecome a serious problem/ 问题 is getting more and more concern/ drawing wide attention.问题表现一. Even worse/Besides, 问题表现二.
说明原因段
Thereare many factors resulting in/ influencing 该问题./Many reasons contribute to 该问题./该问题 is due tothe following factors/ reasons. Among these, 原因一plays / play a vital role/ is an important one. 进一步阐述原因一. What’s more/ In addition, 原因二.
说明方法段
Consideringthe seriousness of 该问题/ the great harm brought by 该问题/ the importance of 该问题， I think it is high time 采取行动或措施/ we paid more attention to 该问题。Firstly/ Above all, 方法一. Secondly/ Moreover, 方法二。 Thirdly/Besides/ In addition, 方法三. To conclude / In a word, it is everyone’s responsibility to 为解决该问题付出努力/ it depends on commoneffort from 对解决问题起作用的人to 最终解决该问题. / It is an urgent thing 解决该问题. / Only in this way/ throughthese ways 该问题才能解决。
How to Improve the Parent-child Relationship
1. 父母与孩子之间的代沟越来越大
2. 造成代沟产生的原因
3. 如何消除代沟，并改善父母与孩子之间的关系
问题解决型模板2.
描述问题段
（As manypeople know, / It is generally accepted that）总数该问题. 表现一/作用一. Additionally, 表现二/作用二. Therefore, how to 总述该问题is worth paying more attention to / more attention from 应该关注该问题的人群.
说明方法/因素段
The following ways can be adopted/ Someeffective measures have been taken to 解决该问题./ Many a factor plays an important role in 解决该问题. Firstly/Above all, 方法一/因素一. Secondly/ Moreover, 方法二/ 因素二.Thirdly/ Besides/ In addition, 方法三/ 因素三.
阐述观点段
As for me/ As far as I am concerned, 我的建议或看法. “我”的理由一. Besides/ In addition, 我的
问题解决型模板3.
描述问题段
Nowadays/Recently/ In recent years, 问题has become quite a serious problem in 问题存在的主要范围/ has aroused widespread attention/ concern form 关注人群. 问题表现一/原因一/重要性一. What’s worse/ In addition, 问题表现二/原因二/重要性二.
说明危害段
( It is very clear that / As everyonesees,) 该问题 is /arebringing great damage/ harm to 危害对象/ 该问题produce(s) harmfuleffects in many aspects,/ (Though 该问题可能不太严重的表现，)该问题 can bring great negative effects (on 影响的对象)》 Above all / First of all, 危害一. 进一步阐述危害一. Furthermore/Moreover/ Even worse/ What’s more, 危害二.
说明方法段
Undoubtedly/ Considering the seriousness ofthe problem, it is an urgent thing (for us to take effective measures ) to 解决该问题./ We should pay more attentionto 该问题. Firstly/First of all, 方法一. 进一步阐述方法一./ Secondly/ Moreover, 方法二. Thirdly/ Besides/ In addition, 方法二/方法三. Only through these ways / Only in this way 该问题才能够解决.
第三类：现象解释型结构模板
第一段：通过数据展示和现象描述，提出问题可能的原因有如下几个方面。
第二段：承接首段观点，对本段内容加以限制，分层次说明现象的原因。
第三段：结论，简要提出建议。
模板1：
As is clearly sown by the (table, chart, graph), obviously there isa great rise in….., while there is a great falling in…..现象
（According to the recent survey, 现象）
There are three reasons for the (tendency, phenomenon). (severalfactors contribute to the …..) one is that ….Another important reason lies inthe fact that….. What’s more….
To the tendency (Phenomenon), I suggest/ think …..(In a word, if,,,,there is certain to be….)
模板2
引言段最后一句可以是：
The reasons for this phenomenon can belisted as follows.
The following three reasons can explain theproblem.
This situation comes form the reasonsbelow.
结尾段可以这样表达
In light of the explanation of its causesabove, we suggest that …
After analyzing the causes of this matter,I would like to suggest that ….
我学会了包饺子
那是一个快乐的星期天，我们全家人聚在一起包饺子。
妈妈备好饺子皮和馅，大家就围着桌子包起饺子来。我也嚷嚷着要学包饺子，妈妈答应了，并在一旁示范起来。只见妈妈左手拿着饺子皮，在饺子皮的边沿沾上水，然后用勺子把馅放到饺子皮中央，同时两边一捏，一个漂亮的饺子就在妈妈手中诞zhidao生了。啊！做饺子那么简单呀。我迫不及待地学着妈妈的样子包起饺子来。
我捏住饺子的这边，那边的馅冒出来，捏住那边，这边的陷又冒出来了内。后来，我干脆把面皮放进手里，同时两边一捏，两边都不出陷了，但它的“肚子”却破了，我赶紧拿来另一张面皮，把它的“肚子”补上，这才算包了一个饺子。看看妈妈捏的饺子一个个挺着“将军肚”，活像打了胜仗的大将军，而我的呢，还没上“战场”就已经先趴下了。大家笑得前俯后仰。但我并不灰心，“万事开头难”，我又认真的包起饺子。不一会儿，我终于掌握了做饺子的技巧，一个个漂亮的饺子也在我手中诞生了。
品尝自己包成的饺子时，我觉得格外香，享受自己劳动的果实是最甜美的。通过这件事我悟出容了一个道理，“天下无难事，只怕有心人。”
我整理的一些好句子，很实用的，你参考下：1. Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that....
随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是____________。
2. As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.
然而，对于此类问题，人们持不同的看法。(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法)
3. As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....
随着社会的发展，人们开始关注............
4. People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting
求职的过程中，人们慢慢意识到面试的重要性。
5. As to whether it is worthwhile ....., there is a long-running controversial debate. It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.
关于是否值得___________的问题，一7a686964616fe59b9ee7ad94364直以来争论不休。当然，不同的人对此可能持不同的观点。
6.In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma.
在都市的发展中，我们往往会陷入困境。
7.Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....
最近，这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注，有人开始担心______________。
8.The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.
人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段，经济全球化、都市化的速度不断加快，随之给我们带来了很多问题。
9...... plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?"
_______显得非常重要而成为当今世界所关注的最大的问题，这是无可厚非的。不过，问题是："我们该如何抉择?"
10.Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges,
现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代。
展现问题篇
问题的常用词：question, problem, issue
1.Recently, the issue of ...... has been brought into public focus.
近来，_______的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。
2.Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in people's attitude towards some traditional practice.
现在我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代，很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很大改变。
3.Recently the issue of whether or not ... has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.
近来，是否_______的问题已经非常明确而且引起了社会的广泛关注。
4.The issue whether it is good or not to .... has aroused a heated discussion all over the country.
______的利与弊已在全国范围内引起热烈的讨论。
5.At present, some people think ....while others claim ...Both sides have their merits.
目前，一些人认为_______而另一些人则认为_______。其实，两种观点都其可取之处。
6.People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue.
对于这种极具争议的话题，我们很难作出绝对的回答。
7.People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.
不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。
8.The controversial issue is often brought into public focus. People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue.
这中极具争议性的话题往往很受社会的关注。不同的人对此问题的看法也不尽相同。
9.When asked ..., some people think..... while some prefer...
说到______，有人认为________，而另一些人则认为__________。
10.Just as the saying goes: "so many people, so many minds". It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person.
俗话说，""。不同的人对此有不同的看法是可以理解的。
11.To this issue, different people come up with various attitudes.
对于这个问题，不同的人持不同的观点。
12.There is a good side and a bad side to everything, it goes without saying that...
万事万物都有其两面性，所以，勿庸置疑，____________。
13.When it comes to ..., most people believe that ..., but other people regard ...as ....
提到_________问题，很多人认为_________，不过，一些人则认为______是____.
14.When faced with...., quite a few people claim that ...., but other people think as...
提到_________问题，仅少数人认为________，但另一些人则认为_________。
15.There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of .... There who criticize ...argue that ...., they believe that ...,but people who favor .., on the other hand, argue that...
目前，_______问题争议较大。批判_______的人认为_______，他们认为_______，不过，另一方面，赞同_______的人则认为_________。
16.Some people are of the opinion that..
有些人认为_____________。
17.Many people claim that...
很多人认为_____________。
A majority of 绝大多数
A large number of 很多人
18.Some people contend that ... has proved to bring many advantages (disadvantages)
有些人认为________有很多有利之处(不利之处)。
19.Those who argue for ... say that ...economic development of the cities.
觉得_____的人认为，______ 城市的经济发展。
20.Some people advocate that ....
有些人在坚持认为_________。
21.They hold that ... 他们认为_________。
22.People, who advocate that ..., have their sound reasons (grounds)
坚持认为______的人也有其说法(依据)。
23.Those who have already benefited from practicing it sing high praise of it.
那些从中受益的人对此大家褒奖。
24.Those who strongly approve of ... have cogent reasons for it.
强烈认同_______的人有很多原因。
25.Many people would claim that...
有人会认为___________。
26.People who support ... give some or all of the following reasons.
那些支持_________观点的人列出了如下原因：________。
27.But others hold the view that ...但是，另外一些人则认为_______。
观点的用词：Attitude, opinion, 与其搭配的动词以及词组：Take, have, come up with，set forth, put forward等。
28.But on the other hand, there are also quite a few people who strongly advocate that..,.
不过，另一方面，也有少部分人坚持认为_______________。
29.But people who are ..., on the other hand , maintain that...
不过，另一方面，________的人认为__________。
30.However, there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.
然而，很多人对此有不同的看法。
问题用词：Issue, phenomenon，后接介词, on, over等。
31.However, some others argue that... 然而，另一些人则认为_________。
32.However, there are also some others who contend that...
然而，也有人认为__________。
34.But other people set forth completely totally different argument concerning this case.
不过，对于此，另一些人则持完全不同的观点。
35.Some people examine this issue from another angle.
有的人用另一角度来看这一问题。
36.On the other hand, there are also many opponents who strongly ...
另一方面，也有很多反对的人，他们认为_____________。
44.After a thorough consideration, for my part, I am in favor of the latter view that...
经过深思熟虑，我较支持后一种看法，亦即________________________。
46.Taking into consideration both sides of the issue, I tend to favor the latter view..
比较两种观点进行比较，我较同意后一种观点，亦即_________________。