老师作业：帮我写篇英语四级作文请进

Nowadays, there exists a wide range of recreational activities, which are prepared for people to choose from. And the opinions about choosing the recreational activities are varied.
Some people believe it is helpful to take part in recreational activities. They maintain such an idea because they can get happiness and relaxation from the activities. However, others hold that recreational activities may bring some problems, as they take drunk driving and flight into consideration.
For our university students, I think that recreational activities have more good aspects than harm ones .Firstly ,we can relax ourselves after a day’s working stress. Secondly ,it also give us a chance for friends to get gather .Last but not least, it can stimulate inspiration. In a word, recreational activities are necessary for everyone.
给你改了一些，有些语法错误改了，有些我用了些比较感觉比较好的表达，希望帮到你。。。在word 里加了红字7a686964616fe59b9ee7ad94362的 这里看不出来

"My Favorite Teacher
My favorite teacher is my English teacher who is a kind-hearted woman. She is very strict with us students . She can make her calsses lively and interesting and helps us to overcome the difficulties. She is a easygoing teacher and we get along well with her.All of the students love her，and she is our good friend. We are very lucky to meet such a good teacher,and we will remember her forever."
译文：
“我最喜欢的老师
我最喜欢的老师是我的英语老师，她是一个善良的人。她对我们学生要求很严格。她上的课也很生动有趣，她经常帮助我们克服困难。她是一个随和的老师，而且和我们与她相处得很好。所有的学生都喜欢她,她是我们的好朋友。我们非常幸运,遇到这样一位好e79fa5e98193e58685e5aeb9333老师,我们将不会忘记她。”
值得肯定的是,没有错误的单词,但是病句很多,即句子结构错e69da5e887aa7a64333误严重.
1.With the development of economy,the gap betwwen the urban and rural areas seems increased(前面那个动名词根本就缺少句子成分)
2.The urban areas [are] developing better and better,the rural areas geting and geting worse and worse.the rural areas are geting worse and worse.
3. is not developing very well
4.so many rural people dont have a good
5.many rural youngers go to the urban areas and there are not many talented ones staying in rural areas.
还有一些句子冗余,还有一些地方需要桥接下,修改成这样会好很多:
1.better and better,on the controry,the rural areas ...
2. I think改为in my opinion
3.We should take 改为it should be taken ...,后面再添加一句,so what could we do on earth?
4.Lastly改为 the last one but not at least(最后但不是最重要的一个)
5.最后再添加一句:all in all ,with the efforts of all of people,the gap between the urban and rural areas will be smaller,and disappear finally.

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