四级情景提示作文：Military Training

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四级情景提示作文：Military Training

有关军训的英语作文（80字左右）急 ！

英语作文军训之感（英汉互译）

有关军训的英语作文

一、四级情景提示作文：Military Training

Military Training

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Military Training. You should write at least 120 words, and your composition should be based on the following information:

现在，绝大多数大学的新生在入校后就要进行为期两周左右的军训，想必你也有过此种经历。请你就此发展一些个人的意见。

【范文】

Military Training

Military training is one of the most arduous① and memorable experiences of my life.

During the two weeks of the military training, everyone of us has experienced great changes, both in outward appearances and in our emotions. The sharp contrast between untrained men and trainees was what the latter were so dark. It seemed as if we had been to Africa. Wearing uniforms all the time, we dared to sit anywhere, no matter how dirty the ground might be, and little chance was left for us to pay attention to our clothes, even though most of the girls wanted very much to look their best②. When daily training was finished, some of the so-called soldiers would transform themselves into another form; their caps were worn askew③, their uniforms swung in the wind, and their belts were swung casually in their hands. On these occasions, they were no longer soldiers, but bandits④! However, this kind of contrast can not be seen any longer — a loss to the scenery of the campus, to some extent.

There is no doubt that spiritual changes played a more important role in our military training in that it helped us know more about perseverance, bravery and obedience to orders. Although arduous, standing at attention is an effective way to gain these virtues. When standing, we would neither move, talk, nor make any facial expressions. We had to stand up straight, look straight ahead, and put our hands straight on the seams⑤ of our trousers. Sweat trickled down slowly from our foreheads like snakes crawling over our faces. But none of us complained. We endured it, and withstood all these uncomfortable things as much as possible. So, after two weeks of training, we changed a lot. We became totally different from what we used to be. We learned how to endure more and complain less.

【注释】

①arduous：费力的；艰难的

②look one’s best：显得最好看

③askew：歪；斜

④bandit：强盗；土匪

⑤seam：缝；接缝；链接处

【点评】

本文是一篇根据情景提示展开的描写性议论文，其中心思想是写军训既艰苦又令人难忘，不仅对大学生的外貌乃至思想和人格都有所改变和提高、磨练。第一段是总论，第二段写军训对大学生outward appearance的影响。第三段，也是军训对大学生受益最大的一方面——锻炼意志，服从命令，培养吃苦耐劳的品质；最后两句话起概括全文的作用。

作者刻画非常细致， 对军训学生的脸、汗水、装着及心理都有很独到的准确描写，有时，还用上几个比喻，给读者身临其境的感觉。

参考文献：英语作文高分必背丛书：大学英语四级写作/李华田主编，武汉大学出版社，2005

一、有关军训的英语作文（80字左右）急 ！

During the Days of Military Training

The day we were looking forward to came at last----a week's military training began.
During the training, each of us did his part in earnest. We drilled more than six hours a day, though it was very hot at the time.
In the blazing sun, we always tried to measure up to the high standards which were demanded . Sweat streamed down and we wouldn't wipe it off. Olny three days later our faces were tanned.We felt happy and proud of it .
Our platoon officer was a young PLA man, about twenty years old. He was very strict with us during the training and very kind to us afterwards. By talking with him, we came to know not only more information about army life, but also about military affairs.
The military training gave us good discipline. It brought us great happiness, too. We'll never forget it.

二、英语作文军训之感（英汉互译）

军训英语作文：During the Days of Military Training，欢迎大家参考借鉴!

We have just finished our military training.I have to admit that I have so much feelings to express! This has been the first time for me to get in touch with my new school.No doubt it has left a good impression in my mind.I feel very happy to study here.During the training period,I had experienced a great hardship due to the hot weather and severe trainers.With time passed by,I gradually adapted to everything and felt myself much more strong to the hardship we faced.Furthermore, there was a lot of fun during the training. I has enjoyed a good relationship with my new classmates.Now that the training is over, I still have learned a lot . I can‘t wait any more to start my new life in high school.

我们刚刚进行完军训。我有太多地感受要表达。这是我第一次与我的新学校接触，无疑在我的心中留下了好印象，我感到很高兴在这里学习。在军训期间，我必须面对炎热的天气和严厉的教官。随着时间的增加，我们所面临的更加艰苦，但是军训中也有许多乐趣。我与我的新同学建立了很好的关系。现在军训结束了，我从中学会了很多。我马上就要开始了我的心学习生活。

满意望采纳O(∩_∩)O

三、有关军训的英语作文

During the Days of Military Training

The day we were looking forward to came at last----a week's military training began.
During the training, each of us did his part in earnest. We drilled more than six hours a day, though it was very hot at the time.
In the blazing sun, we always tried to measure up to the high standards which were demanded . Sweat streamed down and we wouldn't wipe it off. Olny three days later our faces were tanned.We felt happy and proud of it .
Our platoon officer was a young PLA man, about twenty years old. He was very strict with us during the training and very kind to us afterwards. By talking with him, we came to know not only more information about army life, but also about military affairs.
The military training gave us good discipline. It brought us great happiness, too. We'll never forget it.