雅思作文范文大全：压力是怎么来的

Some people think that only students with the best academic results should be rewarded, while others think we should reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
有些人认为只有最好成绩的学生才应该被奖励，而其他人认为取得进步的学生应该被奖励。讨论双边观点并给出你的看法。
奖励最优的理由是什么？因为可以鼓励竞争e799bee5baa6e997aee7ad94e58685e5aeb9361(encourage a sense of competition)，而竞争的话题咱们之前考过很多次，也写过很多次。优秀学生能够给其他学生树立榜样(set a good example)，能够激励其他学生刻苦学习(become an incentive for students to study hard)。
奖励进步的理由是什么？因为可以避免竞争，竞争的弊端咱们不也写过么？会导致学生的压力，不利于心理健康(psychological health)。此外，考试考第一的只能有一个人，但是每个人都可以有进步。如果我们奖励的是进步的学生，那么即使是最差的学生也愿意去改变自己(have the motivation to change)，这才是对待学习的正确态度(a positive attitude to study)。
最后一段个人观点写到了教育的本质：让每个人都开发自己的潜力(tap the students’ potential)，每个人都发挥自己的才能develop their talents。人生不是去和别人竞争，而是和自己竞争，是一个不断完善自我的过程(a journey of self-improvement)。
Traditionally, the school would reward top students with the highest scores or best performance, but some people believe that the reward should be granted to students who have made considerable progress In this essay, I will discuss this issue from both sides.
It is quite reasonable to reward those excellent students because they deserve the prize. The number of prizes is limited, so they should be given to those really outstanding students. This would encourage a sense of competition between students, as they know they need to become the best to get recognized by other people. The top students would set a good example for other students and the award would become an incentive for students to study hard and excel in their study.
However, some people believe the competition between children may lead to pressure, which is not good for children's psychological health. It is impossible for everyone to take the first place in an exam, so the reward system should be revised. If we can reward those students who show obvious progress in their study and behavior, even the “worst” student would have the motivation to change, and this would help students develop a positive attitude to study and life.
In my opinion, the purpose of education is to tap the students potential and create an environment in which every student can fully develop their talents In this sense, it is more important to praise and reward students who have made improvement than those who are the best. Teachers and parents should make children understand that life is not a competition with others, but a jouney of self-improvement.
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人们常常说压力百大，压力大。自己过的很无助，压力大的让自己都不知道干什么好了。
在现在的社会中谁没有压力？有压力是好事。太大太多也不是很好。没压力的人生活就是行尸走肉度，不知道自己可以干什么，能干什么，对自问己的生活没有意义了。
压力就是动力，很多人都知道，但是不知道如何把压力转成动力。那就必须先知道，自己的压力是从哪里来的，要冷静去面对，冷静去思考。
有压力就带动自己答的思想版去做，如果一个人承受不住，那就应该去舒缓情绪，找找自己的动力。
我们不是小说漫画的主角，什么事都不是自己权一个人可以杠的。杠不住就去找人帮忙分担，理解一下。
要看清楚自己走的什么路，在压力的推动下走下去。