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She/He is my teacher/classmate.His/Her name is (xxx)
同学：
He/She has a talent in(写他有什么才能）zhidaoHe/She likes to (写他喜欢在休闲是件干嘛) on his/her social hours.I have known him/her for (你和他认识几年了)years.I've met him/her (你们是怎么认识的).We usually(你们在一起的时候哦回的哦干嘛)together. He/She is a really good friend of mine
老师：
He/She is my （科目）teacher. He/She had been my teacher for (他当你答的老师几年了）years. When he/she teaches he/she(他上课的时候哦的特点).He/she is a really helpful teacher.I've learned many things in his/her class.
1、My favourite teacher is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. She has two big eyes, a high nose and a little red mouth. There is always a smile on her face.
译：我最喜欢的老师是黄老师。她是一位美丽的女士。她有两只大眼睛，一个高高的鼻子和一个红色的小嘴巴。她脸上总是挂着微笑。
2、Miss Huang likes singing and collecting posters. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is good at dancing, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing.
译：黄老师喜欢唱歌和收集海报。她钢琴弹得很好。晚上，她总是坐在钢琴前弹奏优美的音乐。她也擅长跳舞。有时她教我们跳舞。
3、Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favourite color is blue. Because blue is the color of the sky and the sea.
译：黄老师很喜欢狗，因为狗很友好很可爱。她最喜欢的颜色是蓝色。因为蓝色是天空和海洋的颜色。
My English Teacher
I began to like English when I entered the senior
high school. I owe it to my English teacher who has stimulated① my great
interest in learning English and then influenced my future, and whose
name is Zhang Yanshu----a name I will keep in my mind forever.
She
showed great love to us which is deeply appealing to②our heart.
Different from other teachers, she has never been impolite to us.
Oppositely, she treated us equally. She made efforts to attract us to
the world of English, to understand the beauty of the language and enjoy
the cultures of the foreign countries. With her skillful help, the
students in our class took great interest in this course and improved
rapidly.
She was kind and patient. She did not mind the students'
slowness in learning new knowledge, but it did not mean that she was not
strict with us. To make what we had learned strong, she often asked us
to recall③ the knowledge in class. This was also a method to examine the
homework she had assigned④. In that case, we had to work hard so as to
live up to⑤her hope.
She is such an excellent teacher that we got so
much from her, not only the knowledge but also kindness, diligence⑥ and
appreciation for beauty. All these will be useful to all my life.
【词语解释】
①stimulate ['stimjuleit]v．激发
②appeal to[+'pi:lt+]vi．有感染力；有吸引力
③recall [ri'k&:l]v．回顾；回忆
④assign[+'sain]v．布置；分配；指定
⑤live up to 不辜负；实践
⑥diligence['dilidN+ns] n．勤勉；勤奋；努力
【写法指要】
1）本文从“对学生的爱”和“和蔼耐心”两方面，写出了张老师感人至深的优秀品质。文章写得圆满、充实。
2）文章引言段第二句是一个掉尾句或圆周句（periodic
sentence），也叫左枝句（left-branching
sentence）。掉尾句是将句子中的主要内容放在末尾的句子。这种句子可以造成悬念（suspense）这一修辞效果e799bee5baa6e78988e69d83331，即把读者的胃口吊起来，催促其看下文，类似说评书时到要紧三关处的“且听下回分解”。掉尾句与松散句（loose
sentence）相对。后者把主要内容安排在句子的前半部分。
松散句是人们习惯上常用的普通的句子。掉尾句是一种修辞句法，是人们在演讲和写作时为了某种修辞效果而特意安排的句式。
1、My favourite teacher is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. She has two big eyes, a high nose and a little red mouth. There is always a smile on her face.
译：我最喜欢的老师是黄老师。她是一位美丽的女士。她有两只大眼睛，一个高高的鼻子和一个红色的小嘴巴。她脸上总是挂着微笑。
2、Miss Huang likes singing and collecting posters. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is good at dancing, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing.
译：黄老师喜欢唱歌和收集海报。她钢琴弹得很好。晚上，她总是坐在钢琴前弹奏优美的音乐。她也擅长跳舞。有时她教我们跳舞。
3、Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favourite color is blue. Because blue is the color of the sky and the sea.
译：黄老师很喜欢狗，因为狗很友好很可爱。她最喜欢的颜色是蓝色。因为蓝色是天空和海洋的颜色。