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Dear Ms Jenkins,
I'm Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I'm writing to ask for your help. I'm applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format I've used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I'd be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment.
Thank you for your kindness!e799bee5baa6e79fa5e98193e59b9ee7ad94338
Yours,Lihua
我是同济大学的在校生，像英语这类的课程应该比较提高（当然，英语是我初高中时候最有把握的一门课，在高手如林的重点高中，英语卷面成绩第一总能帮我拉一拉总分），只要你真的花时间了，肯定可以较快提高，这一些心得体会我已经跟很多人分享过了（通过交谈、邮件、百度知道），所以我的学习经验真的是“复制..复制..再复制.”如果你觉得靠谱的话就去试试吧，希望对你也有所帮助。我们今天就讲讲作文的写法
【英语作文的考试重点】
初高中的英语作文重在展现你自己的水平：1.语法，尽可能不出现语法错误。2.书写，书写尽量工整，这个一方面能够让老师看得舒服，另一方面也表明了你写作的思路流畅。3.从句、长句、优美的句子、高级词汇的灵活运用。e799bee5baa6e59b9ee7ad94330
【万金油句子举例】
1.___has been brought into focus,and ____ always aroused the greatest concern
2.Among the various reasons contributing to this phonomenon, ____ plays an important part.
3.There is no complete agreement among people as to ____ .Some people take it for granted that _____________ while others hold the opinion that ___________ .
4.Taking above metioned factors into consideration, I think ________
5.In a whole, ___________
【提高的方法】
我高二的时候买了一本书《王长喜十句作文法》讲的是关于四六级考试的，应用优美的模板来写作的技巧（说实在的这个有点儿投机取巧，但是应对考试绰绰有余）。我分析了一下平时的考卷，发现作文的题材有六七成都和里面所介绍的五种相关，我就把他里面提供的相同题材的几个不同模板做了一下整理，每种题材整理出一个我自认为最完美的模板（模板中不乏显摆自己高超语法技巧的闪光点）然后每一次考试尽量套上一个适合的模板，结果是十有八九我的作文会成为范文之一。
所以，建议你买一本类似于模板的书，这种书市面上现在很多的，不仅是王长喜的，其他的也有。你现在要万金油句子你也不一定会运用得很自然甚至巧妙，因此，整理出几套模板，然后就这几套模板好好看一些优秀的例文。相信不久你的作文水平会得到很大的提升
真希望说了这么多对你有实质性的帮助，加油啊，期待你如愿以偿，加油！
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【英语作文八种常用句型】
一) 原因
1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.
A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem).
2. The answer to this problem involves many factors.
3. The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that...
4. The factors that contribute to this situation include...
5. The change in ...largely results from the fact that...
6. We may blame ...,but the real causes are...
7. Part of the explanations for it is that ...
One of the most common factors (causes ) is that ...
Another contributing factor (cause ) is ...
Perhaps the primary factor is that …
But the fundamental cause is that
二) 比较
1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.
2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
3.A may
On the Enlightenment of English learning English is more important now. But it is difficult for many students to study it. Now I make some suggestion, maybe can help you. First, you should take notes and take them here and there. When you’e79fa5e98193e58685e5aeb9330re free, you can take them out and read it. Next, you should read English loudly. Many students know many grammars, but talking with others is hard. So reading is very important. It can make progress in your talking and listening, and it can also make you get excited, let you have a nice day. Then, talk with people in English; it’s interesting and very used. Finally, most importantly, try your best to learn English. No pains, no gains. I hope you can improve your English. Good luck!