英语作文点评

运用英语写作的能力,作为四项基本语言技能之一,其重要性是为英语教学界所公认的.然而,在当前的英语教学实践中,存在这样一种现状：教师重视英语写作训练,但却忽视对学生作文的反馈,未能正确认识自己在学生作文批改中所扮演的角色.翻开学生的作业本,看到的多是简单的对、错符号或分数或等e799bee5baa6e58685e5aeb9366级,几乎没有评语,至多是千篇一律的Good / Not bad / All right / Ok或Perfect.以致许多学生对教师的这些简单评语感到莫名其妙,无法正确认识自己的写作水平.以下是本人结合自己的教学实践和亲身体会,就如何写好英语作文评语,及时向学生反馈指导性的意见,浅谈一下自己的几点看法. 一、评语中的语法修改不仅要让学生知其然,更要知其所以然. 中学生在学习英语的过程中,最大的难题就是动词及其用法.由于汉语中动词没有时态变化,英汉的这一差别往往会干扰学生正确使用英语时态.如在表达“我差点忘了.”此意思时,学生在作文中写成“I almost forget.”.其实,此例句独立表意,不受上下文的限制.在评语中,教师应引导学生进行这样的逻辑思维：The action "forget" just now happened, so we should use the Past Tense.Its use is something like the verbs--know / think / recognize…. Do you still remember the sentence--- “Sorry, I didn't recognize you." 学生写记叙文时常混用时态.如,When my cousin was a child, he likes sports and reading. He played volleyball, basketball and so on. He is reading many books about scientists such as Einstein, Madam Curie, Edision etc. And he wants to be a scientist after he graduates the university.

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Our school is preparing to hold (prepared被动不百合适度)
Festival will be held
It includes singing songs
There are...are your fans 此句有两个谓语动知词，there be 和主系表结道果冲突。内可改为A number of students in our school are your fans.
We will feel pleased(pleasure 名词放feel后不容合适)