4级作文模板

我们老师给的，很不错哦

对比选择模板二：
① quite a few/ a lot of people believe/ takeit for granted that 某人观点或做法。②even some people 进一步说明该观点或做法.③However， I hold the entirely differentview./ I don’t approve/favor 这种观点或做法./ I don’t think 该观点或做法的不当之处.
//①(Nowadays /Inrecent years,)一种现象.②Some 一些人的看法或做法，while others 另一些的看法或做法. ③ As to me, Iprefer to /am in favor of the former/latter(opinion) (提出e799bee5baa6e997aee7ad94e58685e5aeb9333观点段)
④ Of course, 我不赞同观点的合理性.⑤ For example, 支持其合理性的例子、(Also,)进一步阐述其合理性.⑥ But it doesn’t mean/ it is worthnoting that 我不赞同观点的不足.⑦From my point of view/ In my view, 我的不同观点.(反面论证段)
⑧The following reasons can accountfor/ contribute to /support my argument.⑨ First, 理由一.⑩ A goodexample to illustrate is 支持理由一的例子/进一步说明理由一.11Second,理由二. 12 To conclude/From the foregoing, 重申观点.

第二类：问题解决型
1. 现在很多年轻人缺乏拼搏精神
2. 导致这一问题的原因是什么
3. 大学生应该加强拼搏精神

问题解决型模板1
描述问题段
Nowadays / In recent years, there are (still)/ have been quite (a)few people 或其他涉及人群who 做法、看法./ (still) more and more/(still) quite a few/ few people (still) 或其他涉及人群的做法/看法. However /Indeed, 这种做法/看法的不当之处/危害性/表现. Even worse/ besides， 进一步说明该做法/看法的危害/表现.
// Nowadays/ In recent years, 问题is /are becoming / have/ hasbecome a serious problem/ 问题 is getting more and more concern/ drawing wide attention.问题表现一. Even worse/Besides, 问题表现二.
说明原因段
Thereare many factors resulting in/ influencing 该问题./Many reasons contribute to 该问题./该问题 is due tothe following factors/ reasons. Among these, 原因一plays / play a vital role/ is an important one. 进一步阐述原因一. What’s more/ In addition, 原因二.
说明方法段
Consideringthe seriousness of 该问题/ the great harm brought by 该问题/ the importance of 该问题， I think it is high time 采取行动或措施/ we paid more attention to 该问题。Firstly/ Above all, 方法一. Secondly/ Moreover, 方法二。 Thirdly/Besides/ In addition, 方法三. To conclude / In a word, it is everyone’s responsibility to 为解决该问题付出努力/ it depends on commoneffort from 对解决问题起作用的人to 最终解决该问题. / It is an urgent thing 解决该问题. / Only in this way/ throughthese ways 该问题才能解决。
How to Improve the Parent-child Relationship
1. 父母与孩子之间的代沟越来越大
2. 造成代沟产生的原因
3. 如何消除代沟，并改善父母与孩子之间的关系
问题解决型模板2.
描述问题段
（As manypeople know, / It is generally accepted that）总数该问题. 表现一/作用一. Additionally, 表现二/作用二. Therefore, how to 总述该问题is worth paying more attention to / more attention from 应该关注该问题的人群.
说明方法/因素段
The following ways can be adopted/ Someeffective measures have been taken to 解决该问题./ Many a factor plays an important role in 解决该问题. Firstly/Above all, 方法一/因素一. Secondly/ Moreover, 方法二/ 因素二.Thirdly/ Besides/ In addition, 方法三/ 因素三.
阐述观点段
As for me/ As far as I am concerned, 我的建议或看法. “我”的理由一. Besides/ In addition, 我的
问题解决型模板3.
描述问题段
Nowadays/Recently/ In recent years, 问题has become quite a serious problem in 问题存在的主要范围/ has aroused widespread attention/ concern form 关注人群. 问题表现一/原因一/重要性一. What’s worse/ In addition, 问题表现二/原因二/重要性二.
说明危害段
( It is very clear that / As everyonesees,) 该问题 is /arebringing great damage/ harm to 危害对象/ 该问题produce(s) harmfuleffects in many aspects,/ (Though 该问题可能不太严重的表现，)该问题 can bring great negative effects (on 影响的对象)》 Above all / First of all, 危害一. 进一步阐述危害一. Furthermore/Moreover/ Even worse/ What’s more, 危害二.
说明方法段
Undoubtedly/ Considering the seriousness ofthe problem, it is an urgent thing (for us to take effective measures ) to 解决该问题./ We should pay more attentionto 该问题. Firstly/First of all, 方法一. 进一步阐述方法一./ Secondly/ Moreover, 方法二. Thirdly/ Besides/ In addition, 方法二/方法三. Only through these ways / Only in this way 该问题才能够解决.

第三类：现象解释型结构模板
第一段：通过数据展示和现象描述，提出问题可能的原因有如下几个方面。
第二段：承接首段观点，对本段内容加以限制，分层次说明现象的原因。
第三段：结论，简要提出建议。
模板1：
As is clearly sown by the (table, chart, graph), obviously there isa great rise in….., while there is a great falling in…..现象
（According to the recent survey, 现象）
There are three reasons for the (tendency, phenomenon). (severalfactors contribute to the …..) one is that ….Another important reason lies inthe fact that….. What’s more….
To the tendency (Phenomenon), I suggest/ think …..(In a word, if,,,,there is certain to be….)
模板2
引言段最后一句可以是：
The reasons for this phenomenon can belisted as follows.
The following three reasons can explain theproblem.
This situation comes form the reasonsbelow.
结尾段可以这样表达
In light of the explanation of its causesabove, we suggest that …
After analyzing the causes of this matter,I would like to suggest that ….
希望对你有所帮助：段e69da5e887aa7a64337首句常用句式如下：

1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.

2. 俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______. It"s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.

3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。

Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.

4. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。

Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides，______.

5. 任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.

6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，……

People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.

7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.

8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。

______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.

9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？

According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______ while. Obviously，______，but why?

On the Celebrity Spokesperson

(celebrity 名人，名流;名声，著名;知名人士，社会名流。)

(spokesperson 代言人;(男/女)发言人。)

Currently, we couldhardly live a single day without seeing a celebrity spokesperson promoting a product or a social campaign on TV, net or other media. This is anintensely popular trend that we cannot fail to notice.

There is no doubt that the celebrity spokespeople could boost the sale of a product. A host of celebrity spokespersons, however, have emerged as the marketing tool of some companies, even companies producing and selling fake and inferior items. This kind of behavior has produced negative impacts on consumers and whole society, which should be severely criticized and penalized. Of course, as is known to all, everything has both bright and dark sides.Some stars’ endorsement of social activities and public campaigns raises public awareness, giving rise to changes in public behavior. In this case, they serve as positive role models of the general public. To name only one case: Pu CX, a household figure, acting as the celebrity spokesman of the China AIDS Foundation, contributes greatly to the cause of AIDS prevention and cure in China.

currently 现在e799bee5baa6e58685e5aeb9363;一般;流畅地;目前现在;通称地，普遍地，当前;目前，眼前地。

campaign 战役;运动，活动;竞选运动;从事运动;竞选运动;作战，出征。

intensely 强烈地，极度;紧张地，认真地;热情地，热切地。

fail 不及格;失败;失灵，失去作用;(指健康)衰退，变弱，消失;破产，失去支付能力;缺乏，不足，(作物)歉收。

boost 一举，一抬，一推;推动，帮助，促进;提高，增加。

host 主人，东道主;旅馆老板;节目主持人;寄主，宿主;主机。一大群，许多。

emerge 浮现，出现;发生，显露，暴露;摆脱，露头，出头。

fake 伪造，捏造，冒充;假装;欺骗，迷惑;冒牌货，仿造品;冒充者，骗子。

inferior 低等的，下级的;次的，较差的;低于他人者，部下，属下;次品。

items 项目。

produce 生产，出产，制造，创作;生育;拿出，出示，提出;上演，上映，播放，出版;引起，产生，招致。

negative 否定的，否认的;片面的，消极的。

impact 冲击，撞击，碰撞;冲击力，撞击力;影响，作用。

severely 严格地，严厉地，严重地，严肃地;朴实无华地。

criticize 批评，批判;苛求，非难。

penalize 对...处刑，规定...应处刑;是不利，对...不公平;处罚。

endorsement 背书，签署;赞同，支持;背书保证，找明星代言。

household 一家人，家眷，家庭，户;普通的，为人所知的。

感恩

On Cultivating the Sense of Gratitude

On college campuses across the nation, there is a noticeable phenomenon that we cannot afford to ignore: far too many young college students lack the sense of gratitude, one of the countless traditional virtues of this ancient land with a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years. These young adults were not and are not aware of the huge importance of expressing gratitude to those who once helped them, from teachers to parents and so forth.

Personally, I deem that the root cause of students without a graceful heart is that they receive an education not valuing the moral sphere. I strongly believe that joint efforts from folks across society are the final remedy for this social headache. As young university students of the new era, we should make our own contributions to this cause. Imagine a world without the sense of gratitude. This kind of world is doomed to failure. Simply put, we should join our hands to heighten our awareness of fostering a graceful heart. Only in this way can we build our society into a harmonious one. My fellow students, I beg you to act from now on

大学生使用信用卡现象

On Credit Card

At present, a wide vareity of credit cards issued by major banks and shopping malls are thriving in colleges and universities across the nation, with a multitude of college students making up a growing population of card holders. Indeed, one out of five students is estimated to be in possession of at least one credit card, and the figure is expected to be on the steady increse, the latest data published by Yangtze Evening Post suggests.

Like anything prior to the emergence of this small piece of plastic, the increasing popularity of credit card on campus has both bright and dark sides. On the one hand, young adults in college, free from the trouble of pocketing a considerable sum of cash, could enjoy the convenience of credit cards and purchase expensive goods by installments. On the other hand, however, the irresponsible and excessive use of the cards by these youngsters, the majority of whom are fresh out of middle school incapable of budgeting their money, can make them heavily in debt which will take them years to pay off.

On my personal level, while enjoying a host of conveniences the credit card may bring, we couldn’t afford to ignore a conspicious fact: in most cases, parents are our sole financial sources.Instead of spending without any restrict, we are supposed to put studies on the top of our agenda and move ourselves beyond heavy dependence upon our parents

社会不文明现象

On Uncivilized Behaviors

We cannot fail to notice that countless uncivilized behaviors exist in our daily lives, such as spitting, talking loudly, littering, saying nasty words in public places and so forth. All these are bad manners that we should not lose sight of. As an ancient land enjoying a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years, China is witnessing a surge in improper acts that every Chinese citizen should feel ashamed of. Uncivilized behaviors by a host of Chinese both at home and abroad have seriously affected China’s image, according to an editorial posted on People Daily’s official website.

As Chinese, we should not get offended when others point out our weaknesses but should focus more attention on improving ourselves. We should strive to identify the causes of those improper behaviors and find ways to eliminate them. There are a host of causes, I would argue, behind this trend. To name only one: the lack of moral education. The government should wage a massive moral campaign to fight against this trend and we ourselves should endeavor to behave decently in our daily lives. As college students of the new age, we should take the leading role.
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