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以下是新东方在线关于2015年英语六级e68a84e8a2ade799bee5baa6363考试作文题的预测，预测作文的范文如下。
题目要求：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your view on people’s addiction to smartphones. You should give sound argument to support your views and write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
参考范文：
Addiction to Smartphones
Do you check your smartphone frequently? Do you feel distracted if your smartphone is not with you? When there’s no wifi or signal for your smartphone, will you get irritated? If you say yes, then you’ve got addiction to smartphones. Smartphone addiction is a phenomenon that causes a lot of troubles to people.
In the first place, it may cause some problems to your health, such as visual fatigue, cervical spondylosis, and even neurasthenia. A friend of mine suffers from a serious spine collapse due to her addiction to smartphones during pregnancy.
Secondly, if you keep playing with your phone when you are with your friends or family, you will spend less time talking to them. In fact, it is they who need and deserve to be cared for.
Lastly, an excessive reliance on smartphones may weaken your interpersonal skills. When you cannot find a place, you consult your GPS instead of consulting local people. You spare more time playing mobile games than playing real games with real people. As time passes, it’s possible that you may have difficulty in communicating with people.
Therefore, isn’t it better to get rid of smartphone addiction?
本题满分为15分，成绩分为六个档次：13-15分、10-12分、7-9分、4-6分、1-3分和0分。各档次的评分标知准见下表：
13-15分
切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小道错。
10-12分
切题。表达思想清楚，文字较连贯，但有少量语言错误。
7-9分
基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。内
4-6分
基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性容差。有较多的严重语言错误。
1-3分
条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
0分
未作答，或只有几个孤立的词，或作文与主题毫不相关。