邀请参加草莓采摘节的英语作文

英语作文：美食节邀请函
Dear Hang Xu,

You're cordially invited to our school's first 'FOOD FESTIVAL.'

Location: XXX Secondary School
Date： Saturday, August 13, 2011, 6:00PM - 9：00PM

There'll be a Pop Songs' live band performance at the event and we can try authentic Asian Food and dessert there. We'll have a chance to see a cooking demonstration from the popular Chinese restaurant. After having the chance of tasting the wonderful variety of food, there'll be a photo session before we leave.

I really hope that you can join us for this wonderful event. Hope to see you there.

Regards,
Susan

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Dear Mr and Mrs Black　
I 'm writing to invite you coming my home for a party .If there is a free wih you ,please be here at :00 p.m next weekend.
Could you still remember the Andrews ,my old frinds,who are live in the US,you have meet
once They'll visit China next week and come my house (address:^e799bee5baa6e79fa5e98193e59b9ee7ad94334^^^^^^^^^^^^^^) to see me by the way.There wil be a personal party to receive the couple of Andrew.I will make some cook all
by myself ,drinking as well as will be offered .Mr Andrew said he miss you so much so does his wife on a call last night .That is the reason why you needn't to warry a bout there is strangeness between this couple and you.I promiss you can only feel comfortable in the party.
I'm waiting for "yes" as your reply.
Yours sincerely

今天下午，我和妈妈去草莓zd园摘草莓。到了草莓园，我看见许多温室大棚，走进温室大棚，就看到了许许多多的草莓。那里的草莓有大的、还有小的，草莓的颜色有深红的、还有淡红的。摘草莓的时候，要选又大又红的草莓，先轻轻地捏住草莓的底部，再扭一下，草莓就摘下来了。
名师点评：文章上头，日期、星期、天气齐全，无疑这是一篇小日记版。日记的题目是摘草莓，主人公是“我”和妈妈，地点是草莓园，事情是“我”和妈妈走进温室大棚采草莓，结果是什么？似乎没完。总体上来说，内容是清楚的，而且还让我们看到了草莓的大小、颜色特点，以及长了学问，那就是如何采摘草莓的动作要领；也看出了小作者是个很细心的人，热爱权生活和自然。不过，你要是能把那些各具特色的草莓写得更加多姿多彩，那你的文章自然更美了。还有，你怎么不尝尝草莓呢？温室大棚的草莓甜不甜？老师也很想听听你的亲身感受，说不定，下次我也跟着你去摘草莓呢！