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When it comes to the opinion of career and family, people always hold different ideas. Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while other people argue that family is the most important in one’e5a48de588b6e799bee5baa6e79fa5e98193334s life.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that career plays a key role in our life. In the very first place, career gives us an aim to live on and makes our life fulfillment. Without career, much of our living time will be certainly boring. What’s more, career can provide us with a means to live on. Most people earn their income from a job to make a live. On the other hand, family is also an indispensable part of life, as many people will admit. Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from pressure in life, and we can feel worm with family. In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family. Without it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate.
As far as I am concerned, career and family are not in opposition to each other. We can concentrate on our job when we are working, and we can spend a happy time with our family when we are off duty. Therefore they can enhance each other so that one’s life can become better and better.
本次大学英语四级考试有一则作文题目是考生在就业和创业之间进行选择,这是和大学生生活极为紧密的话题——大学毕业后的选择:工作还是创业,也是每个大学毕业生都会面临的选择题e5a48de588b67a64336。构思本题可以从以下思路入手,首先开篇明确自己的选择;中间段落具体阐述自己做出这样选择的原因,例如参考范文做出的选择是创业,中间段落具体阐释选择创业的原因是由于爱好和积累经验。结尾段说明无论哪一种选择本身并无对错之分。
真题及参考范文如下:
【题目】
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business of your own. You are to make a decision. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your decision. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
【参考范文】
For undergraduates college students, deciding what to do upon graduation can be a tough decision to say the least. From my point of view, I prefer to launch a business. My choice can be attributed to the following two driving forces.
For one thing, I want to start my own business because I love do what I love. In my own business, I will be more than passionate to plan, organize and execute my favorite project.For another thing, running my own business, I can accumulate rich experience, which is not only valuable to problem-solving but also critical to career development. While the risk of failing is real, what is important part is the lesson learned.
Actually, when in comes time for university graduates to decide their next step in life, there is no on right or wrong choice for everyone. Rather, each students must reach his or her own conclusion.
【参考译文】
对于本科生来说,决定毕业工作之后做什么毫不夸张的说是一个艰难的决定。从我个人而言,我更喜欢创业。以下两点原因可以解释我的选择。
一方面,我是因为想做自己喜欢的事情才选择创业。自己创业时,会投入极大的热情对于自己喜欢的项目进行计划、组织和执行。另一方面,通过创业,可以积累丰富的工作经验,而工作经验对于问题解决还是职业发展都是非常有必要的。虽然失败的风险是真是的,但是重要的是从中吸取教训。
事实上,大学毕业之际,每个人在决定人生中的下一步时无所谓对和错。更恰当的说,每个学生都必须做出自己的选择。
【范文解析】
这次的四级作文再次考了和大学生生活极为紧密的话题——大学毕业后的选择:工作还是创业,这是每个大学毕业生都会面临的选择题。构思本题可以从以下思路入手,首先开篇明确自己的选择;中间段落具体阐述自己做出这样选择的原因,例如参考范文做出的选择是创业,中间段落具体阐释选择创业的原因是由于爱好和积累经验。结尾段说明无论哪一种选择本身并无对错之分。
【题目点评】
今年的英语四级作文主要围绕“大学毕业生的选择”命题,从已知的题目来看,要么是让大家在创业和工作之间进行选择,要么是在读研和创业之间选择,要么是国企就职和合资企业就职记性选择。题目指令非常明确:首先给出自己的选择,其次给出做出这个选择的原因;所以中间段落考生主要要对自己为何做出这种原因做出解释。
破题思路:
第一段:话题描述。
第二段:表明观点+阐述原因。
第三段:观点结论。
建议:
首先我们需要知道,该文主题是工作与家庭哪个更重要。面对这种无法选择的问题,我们需要采取一个中庸的态度,也就是无论是工作还是家庭,我们都得重视。然后分别阐述两者的重要性,最后再总结。
要点提示:
1、理解题意,抓住重心。
2、第一段,引出话题。该文主题工作和家庭哪个更重要。
3、第二段,一一阐述。这种问题,可以先阐述工作的重要性,接着e799bee5baa6e58685e5aeb9365阐述家庭的重要性。
4、第三段,总结全文。说明两者都缺一不可,我们需要好好调节工作与家庭的关系。
参考例文:Career and family
When it comes to the opinion of career and family, people always hold different ideas. Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while other people argue that family is the most important in one’s life.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that career plays a key role in our life. In the very first place, career gives us an aim to live on and makes our life fulfillment. Without career, much of our living time will be certainly boring. What’s more, career can provide us with a means to live on. Most people earn their income from a job to make a live. On the other hand, family is also anindispensable part of life, as many people will admit. Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from pressure in life, and we can feel worm with family. In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family. Without it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate.
As far as I am concerned, career and family are not in opposition to each other. We can concentrate on our job when we are working, and we can spend a happy time with our family when we are off duty. Therefore they can enhance each other so that one’s life can become better and better.