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Langlang was born in 1982 in Shengyang Province. He was fond of piano and started learning how to play it in 1985 . He performed so much gifted in piano.
In 1987 Langlang won the first prize in Shengyang Piano competition. In 1991 he attended into Central Conservatory of Music university. In 1997 Langlang took part in German International Youth pianist Competition and got the first place .
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1.Sports do us good in many respects (TS). It goes without saying that taking exercises can build up our physical strength. In collective sports like sketball, volleyball, or football, we will learn the importance of cooperation. While taking part in sports game, we will try our best to win and arouse urselves the competitive spirit. Sports can also help us relax after a period of exhausting work. However, as the saying goes, "there are two sides to everything", and sports is without exception. We may hurt other players or ourselves if we are not careful enough when participating in sports activities. What's more, excessive or severe training can do harm to our health.
It is also a good way for people to know each other and can promote friendship between people. So long as we are carefully enough, sports can do us nothing but good.
2.There are many bad manners in public in this modern world. For example, smoking in some place where it is forbiden, and bad words when people are talking.Everyone knows that it is not allowed to smoke in hospital, but some or more times there are many people do not obey it, they smoke in the hall or in the patient's room, it is bad for patients. As we hold the Olympic Games, people should use words of civilization when talking to show our predisposition and culture, but many people still can't help saying bad or dirty words, that is bad and needs to make change. In all, we should not behave bad manners in public.
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