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社会热点话题
e68a84e799bee5baa6e997aee7ad94337图表题
书信题
对比观点选择题
格言题
Ⅰ.对比观点选择题:
1.有人认为……;
2.另外一些人认为……;
3.谈谈你的观点和看法。(最好写成4段)
实例二 99年6月真题
Reading Selectively or Extensively?
Outline: 1.有人认为读书要有选择 2.有人认为应当博览群书 3.我的想法
Score: 8分
Some people think reading shall be chosen. Because some books are good to human beings and some books are harmful to people.
Some people think that men should read books widely. Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge. And man can use it to change the world.
It is my point that reading must be selectively. Because reading is important to man. Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more beautiful. We must give up those unhelpful books. They are not good to us. Reading them is wasting time and money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading.
失分原因:结构失调,表述方式单一
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:
(启)Paragraph Ⅰ:
(1)引出将要评论的事物或者是观点;
(2)简明扼要地提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。
Score: 14分
How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.(启)
注:第一句提出问题,第二句提出两种见解
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:
(承)Paragraph Ⅱ:
(1)提出一种观点或优点;
(2)本段的支持性分论点;
(3)本段总结(可以省略)。
英语四级考试最有可能考的作文话题是:现象、建议、意义和原因、次之为危害和观点对比。无论考何种形式作文。
最简易的处理方式是:有汉语提纲则按照汉语提纲写相应的功能段落,若无汉语提纲则按照话题和内容要求直接写相应的功能表达或自己列出基本提纲再写相应功能表达,图表和图画、书信亦可如此。
图画、话语评论和图表作文可按照相同模式来处理:首段引出话语,图画和图表,并对其内容描述评论;二段写对应现象、意义或危害,尾段写看法和建议并展望,背诵功能表达组合完成作e68a84e799bee5baa6e79fa5e98193366文。
话题1:老年人孤独生活
Part I Writing ( 30 minutes )
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the lonely life of aged people. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
Given is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon: an aged grandma sits in front of mirror, looking at "herself" in the mirror and saying to herself, "I feel rather lonely when my son goes to work and my grandson studies in school."
首句功能为:引出图画;之后为图画内容描述,主要是四要素:人、物、动作、文字和环境,写出四要素中的两三点即可。
Obviously, this cartoon can be naturally associated with the significance of children’s accompany for aged parents: if elderly people intend to enjoy happiness, it is advisable for their children to spend more time in parents. In contemporary society, it has become a trend for young people to be busy with their work and study. Meanwhile, an increasing number of youngsters find it difficult to have spare time to accompany lonely parents. However, it is adult children’s accompany that enables aged parents to build up adequate hope, love and enthusiasm for life. As a matter of fact, young people in large numbers have not come to realize the loneliness of aged people.
二段首句:图画联系主题;之后if句为图画简单评论;in contemporary society一句为图画所暗含的社会现象;meanwhile一句为相关人+具体感受;however之后为强调句式,论述意义;尾句是万能总结。
As a youngster, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for us to accompany aged parents, no matter how busy we are. Accordingly, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances tolove, respect and care all elderly people. (196 words)
尾段首句:观点;二句建议;尾句展望未来。