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阅卷老师在语言方面主要从两个方面进行评判：
1、基本正确
四、六级考生的最大问题不是写得太简单,而是严重错误太多.基础一般的同学即使使用小学或中学词汇和句型,只要使用得基本正确,也可以得到及格分数.考生最常犯的语言错误有三类：语法、拼写、标点.最常犯的语法错误包括：时态、冠词、主谓一致、名词单复数等.
2、丰富多变
基础较好的同学,要想取得四、六级写作高分,应做到丰富多变.丰富多变体现在词汇和句型两方面.同一词语在一句话、一个段落乃至一篇文章中最好 不要e799bee5baa6e78988e69d83330重复出现,应尽量使用同、近义词替换（无法替换的关键词除外）.例如：think可以替换为reckon,assume,argue等词.如果想不到同、近义词,可以使用上义词进行替换.此外,句型也应富于变化,不要拘泥于主谓宾句型,可以使用主系表、过去分词和现在分词短 语作状语、不定式短语作状语、状语从句等多种句型.
四级作文如果量化成句数,只需写10句左右；六级只需12句左右.全文应以短句为主,长短句相结合.所谓短句是指10个词左右的句子,不能全篇都是5、6个词的短句.同时,全文应有一定数量的长句,一般15~20词即可,太长则易冗赘.有的同学以为只写长句不写短句,就能取得高分,实际上老师看长句会觉得很累,以为你不会写短句,通常不会给高分.如果一篇中文作文每句都30多个字,定然晦涩难懂,英文也不例外.精炼的短句可以放在段首表示强调； 复杂的长句可以进行具体的论证、举例或描述.
高分真经
（一）背诵
背诵是提高英语(论坛)(论坛)综合能力的法宝,可分为以下5个层次：（1）精彩词汇；（2）精彩句型；（3）精彩句子；（4）万能框架；（5）经典范文.注意句子和句型不一样,精彩句子应作为单词来记忆.背诵前,确保自己已充分理解所有内容.
语言学习有两个关键词--输入（INPUT）和输出（OUTPUT）.听力和阅读属于输入,考生处于被动状态,只需在考场上将听到和看到的东西 弄懂.应对这种题目的技巧很多,容易在短期内提高.但口语和写作属于输出,考生必须变被动为主动,这很难在短期内突破.没有大量的输入,很难进行自由输出.
四、六级写作需要在30分钟内完成一篇短文,共计120或150余字,很多同学叫苦不迭.但若将其改
5个英语六级作文写作拿高分要点：
1、字迹清楚，段落明朗(clear)：字体不要太大，也不要太小，以行间距的三分之一到二分之一为合适;另外，大小要一致，不要忽大忽小;字母的倾斜方向要一致，不要东倒西歪;要抵着给出的虚线写，不能上窜下跳;总之，要给阅卷人636f7079e799bee5baa6e79fa5e98193366清楚、工整的感觉。段落一般为三段，采用段首缩进式，即每段开头空4至8个字母的格，每段段首缩进的量要一致，要让阅卷人一目了然。
2、内容完整，紧扣提纲(complete)：一般来说，六级写作都会给出三点汉语提纲，考生应严格按照三点写成三段。不要有遗漏，也不要随意改变提纲要点的顺序。因为阅卷人要在30秒左右的时间打出分数，所以不希望看到与提纲严重背离的作文。
3、首保正确，再求闪光(correct)：这一条是最核心的，因为在写作时间和篇幅都比较短的情况下，考生写出的内容几乎是一样的，唯一的判断标准几乎就是语言的质量。要首先保证语法和拼写正确，哪怕用小词、短句也可以。有能力的话再追求闪光的词句。例如，有考生在写2009年6月的作文时，写出了这样的开头句：There is no denying the fact that the vital of name has been a hotly debated topic in China. 这句话是套用我以往范文给过的句子，基本结构是对的，但有两处明显的错误。一处为vital，是个形容词，而这里应该用名词。作者可能想用一个牛词来替换importance以显示用词多样，结果弄巧成拙。另外一处错误为name之前应该有冠词a，其实题目中都给了，结果这位同学忽略了，缺乏基本的语法意识。其实作文中常犯的语法错误除了冠词错误，还包括时态错误、名词和动词单复数错误、代词不一致错误、词性错误以及句子主谓不完整错误。下笔时一定要谨慎。篇幅关系这里不能赘述。
4、先总后分，连词用上(coherent)：这里说的是段落的结构和连贯性的问题。英语文章特别喜欢先总后分或开门见山的格局，另外，段落之间和句子之间的形式连接手段特别明显，即关联词用的很多。在写作的时候，几乎就是把给出的三点提纲作为每段的开头句，然后再加上两三个扩展句即理由或例证句就可以了。当然有时候为了论证自然或扩展字数也可以加上一点铺垫的句子。如2009年6月真题作文开头一句既可以是Some people claim that names are of great importance. 也可以是There is no denying the fact that it is a controversial topic whether names are important or not. 然后再说Some hold the positive view.后面再加上两三句论证的话。论证句或扩展句之间最好有连接词，如First, Second, Besides, Also, Similarly, In the same way, However等等。
5、语言简练，论据得当(concise)：不要啰嗦，不要过于重复和堆砌。有些考生背诵了一些经典的句型，为了凑字就全用上了，给人低层次的感觉。如最后一段用同学写道：As far as I am concerned, weighing the pros and cons of the arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter point of view. 其实As far as I am concerned和weighing the pros and cons of the arguments用一个就行了。另外，尽管内容不及语言重要，但也肯定会影响分数的。考生应尽量平时多练，以期在考场上也能很快想到一些有力的理由和贴切的例证。另外，要敢于表达自己的思想，不要一味地为了保证语言正确而裹步不前，只说一些小学生的话。如有同学写09年真题第一段时写道：Some people think that names are important. They say that, if a person has a name, we can remember him. If he does not have a name, we cannot remember him. 这样的作文倒是没有语言错误，但肯定也得不了高分。
六级写作是英语六级考试的第一部分，在写作中往往会遇到以下几方面的困难：时间不够，无话可说，语法错误多，语言简单，文章结构混乱等。而这些问题也是学生在作文考试中得分低的主要原因。如果大家在平时的练习中能够以解决这些问题为目标，相信在写作考试中就会游刃有余。
平时应该如何练习作文，下面给出4点学习建议，供参考。
1.多积累常用写作句型
平时练习时，学生应该多积累常用写作句型，比如作文首段，中间段落，连接词和结尾段。中间段落主要包括写观点，写原因，写后果，写建议，描写图表和图画等。这些都是考试中常见的作文题目中包含的内容，如果平时有所积累，那么上考场自然就不必咬着笔头，无从着手，慌乱紧张了。
2.写作时内容要完整
作文的内容必须包含考题中的所有内容，要紧扣主题和思考清晰。由于字数和时间的限制，所有的表达都要和主题相关，并且要避免冗长地表达，所有的表达句子要直接。近来的六级作文题目往往采用“全英文”的出题，所以大家务必要看懂题目，否则就会偏离主题，不知所云，分数堪忧。
3.写作时考虑到用词的变化
平时要多积累同义词或同义词词组，比如：如果在考场上想写“我认为”这一非常常见的表达，你会怎么写呢?如果你第一个想到的就是think，那么当然太过简单了，因为绝大部分的考生都会这么写，当然也不会让阅卷老师给你加分。但是如果你还能想到除了think之外的表达，比如contend, point out, be convinced等其他的表达，那么肯定能让阅卷老师印象深刻，因而提高作文得分。
4.学会写复杂句型，避免句型单一
很多学生在考场中的句型都是简单句，但是如果分析过高分作文，你不难发现这些作文中除了简单句之外，还有很多并列句和主从复合句。所以想要拿高分的同学必须学会写加分句型——并列句和主从复合句。
提高写作不是一时半会就能做到的，必须方法得当，持之以恒，其实英语学习都是如此，不经历一定的痛苦期是不会有顿悟的那一刻的。希望以上的4点学习建议能帮助学生在之后的六级考试中发挥出色，大家加油，Fighting!
I. 用于文章主题句
1. 不用说?…
It goes without saying that子句
= (It is) needless to say (that)子句
= It is obvious that子句
= Obviously, S. + V.
例∶不用说早睡早起是值得的。
It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.
2. …是不可能的; 无法…
There is no Ving
= There is no way of Ving.
= There is no possibility of Ving.
= It is impossible to V.
= It is out of the question to V.
= No one can V.
= We cannot V.
例∶不可否认的?成功的事业关键在于健康的身心。
There is not denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind.
3. 我深信…
I am greatly convinced (that)子句
= I am greatly assured (that)子句
例∶我深信预防是于治疗。
I am greatly convinced that prevention is better than cure.
4. 在各种…之中?…
Among various kinds of …, …
= Of all the …, …
例∶在各种运动中?我尤其喜欢慢跑。
Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.
5. …是很容易证明的。
It can be easily proved (that)子句
例∶时间最珍贵是很容易证明的。
It can be easily proved that nothing is more precious than time.
6. …无论如何强调都不为过
… cannot be overemphasized
例∶交通安全的重要性无论如何强调都不为过。
The importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized.
7. 就我的看法?…；我认为…
In my opinion, …
= To my mind, ….
= As far as I am concerned, …
= I am of the opinion that子句
例∶就我的看法?打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。
In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.
8. (A) 每个人都知道…
Everyone knows (that)子句
(B) 就我所知?…
As far as my knowledge is concerned, …
例∶就我所知?下列方法对我帮助很大。
As far as my knowledge is concerned, the following ways are of great help to me.
9. 毫无疑问地?…
There is no doubt (that)子句
例∶毫无疑问地?近视在我国的年轻人中是一个严重的问题。
There is no doubt that near-sightedness is a serious problem among the youth of our country.
10. 根据我个人经验?…
According to my personal experience, …
= Based on my personal experience, …
例∶根据我个人经验?微笑已带给我许多好处。
According to my personal experience, smile has done me a lot of good.
11. 在我认识的人当中?也许没有一个人比…更值得我尊敬。
Of all the people I know, perhaps non deserves my respect more than …
例∶在我认识的人当中?也许没有一个人比我的英文老师张老师更值得我尊敬。
Of all the people I know, perhaps non deserves my respect more than Miss Chang, my English teacher.
12. 在我的求学过程中?我忘不了…
In the course of my schooling. I will never forget …
例∶在我的求学过程中?我忘不了学习英文所遭到的大困难。
In the course of my schooling. I will never forget the great difficulty I encountered in learning English.
13. (A) 随着人口的增加e5a48de588b6e79fa5e98193366?… With the increase/growth of the population, …
(B) 随着科技的进步, … With the advance of science and technology, …
例∶随着台湾经济的快速发展?许多社会问题产生了。
With the rapid development of Taiwan's economy, a lot of social problems have come to pass.
14. (A) 在这信息的年代?…扮演重要的角色。
In the age of information and communication, … plays an important role.
(B) 在今日工业社会中?…是生命不可或缺的。
In today's industrial society, … is indispensable to life.
例∶在这信息的年代?计算机扮演非常重要的角色。
In this age of information and communication, the computer plays an extremely important role.
15. 在讨论…?一个人不得不承认…。
In dealing with …, one cannot but admit (that)子句
例∶在讨论未来的职业?一个人不得不承认尽早决定未来的职业很重要。
In dealing with one's future career, one cannot but admit that it is very important to decide one's future career as early as possible.
16. 世上没有什么比…更令我高兴。
Nothing in the world can delight me so much as …
例∶世上没有什么比到快餐店吃汉堡更令我高兴。
Nothing in the world can delight me so much as having hamburgers in fast-food restaurants.
17. … 是必要的 It is necessary that S (should) V
… 是重要的 It is important/essential that S (should) V
… 是适当的 It is proper that S (should) V
… 是紧急的 It is urgent that S (should) V
例∶我们当保持公共场所清洁是应当的。
It is proper that we (should) keep the public places clean.
18. 每当我听到…?我就忍不住感到兴奋。Whenever I hear …, I cannot but feel excited.
每当我做…? 我就忍不住感到悲伤。 Whenever I do …, I cannot but feel sad.
每当我想到…?我就忍不住感到紧张。Whenever I think of …, I cannot but feel nervous.
每当我遭遇…?我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with …, I cannot but feel frightened.
每当我看到… 我就忍不住感到惊讶。Whenever I see …, I cannot but feel surprised.
例∶每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪?我就忍不住感到悲伤。
Whenever I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot but feel sad.
= Every time I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot help feeling sad.
19. 据说… It is said (that)子句
一般认为… It is thought (that)子句
大家都知道… It is known (that)子句
据报导… It is reported (that)子句
一般预料… It is expected (that)子句
一般估计… It is estimated (that)子句
一般相信… It is believed (that)子句
例∶一般相信阅读增加我们的知识、扩大我们的心胸。
It is believed (that) reading increases our knowledge and broadens our mind.
20. …的主要理由是…
The main reason why ….. is (that)子句
例∶青少年犯罪的主要理由是社会环境日一败坏。
The main reason why the juveniles commit crimes is that social environment is becoming worse.
21. 俗语说得好：「…」。
Well goes an old saying, "…"
= As an old saying goes(runs, says), "…"
= An old saying goes, "…"
= It's an old saying (that)子句
例∶俗话说得好：「诚实为上策」。
As an old saying goes, "Honesty is the best policy."
22. (A) …用下列方法… … in the following ways.
(B) …有三个主要理由。 … for three major reasons.
(C) 要…?至少我们可做三件事。 To …, there are at least three things we can do.
例∶(A) 我用下列方法增加信心。
I increase my confidence in the following ways.
(B) 人们学外语有三个理由。
People learn a foreign language for three major reasons.
(C) 为了维护健康?我们每天至少可做三件事。
To keep healthy, there are at least three things we can do every day.
II. 用于文章承转句
23. 那就是(说)…；亦即…
That is to say, …
= That is, …
= Namely, …
例∶我们生活需有规律。也就是说?早睡早起?戒除烟酒。
We need to live a regular life. That is, we can keep good hours and refrain from smoking and drinking in the daily activities.
24. (A) 基于这个理由?… For this reason, …
(B) 为了这个目的?… For this purpose, …
例∶基于这个理由?我已决定把行医作为未来的职业。
For this reason, I have decided to take practicing medicine as my future career.
25. 我们有理由相信…
We have reasons to believe (that)子句
例∶我们有理由相信体罚应该严格禁止。
We have reasons to believe that corporal punishment should be strictly prohibited.
26. 事实上?…
As a matter of fact, …
= In fact, …
例∶事实上?健康才是最重要。
As a matter of fact, it is health that counts.
27. (A) 例如?… For example, …
(B) 拿…做例子 Take … for example.
例∶例如?我们盲目地提高生活水准?却降低生活品质。
For example, we elevate the living standards blindly, but lower the quality of life.
28. 此外?我们不应忽视…
Besides (In addition), we should not neglect …
例∶此外?我们不应忽视每个人都想要一个温馨祥和的社会。
In addition, we should not neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.
29. 相反地?…
on the contrary, …
= by contrast, …
例∶相反地?少数学生似乎还在鬼混。
On the contrary, a few students, it seems, are still fooling around.
30. 另一方面?…
on the other hand, …
例∶政府应严格执法?另一方面?大众也应该培养减少污染的好习惯。
The government should enforce laws strictly. On the other hand, the public also should develop the good habit of reducing pollution.
31. 然而?很可惜的是…
However, it is a pity that子句
例∶然而?很可惜的是他总是临时抱佛脚。
However, it is a pity that he should always cram at the eleventh hour.
32. 换言之?…
in other words, …
= to put it differently
例∶换言之?我会尽最大的努力达成我的目标。
In other words, I will try my best to attain (gain, live up to) my goal.
33. 别人可能认为这是事实?但我不是。我认为…
It may be true as assumed by others, but I don't. I believe that子句
例∶别人可能认为这是事实?但我不是。我认为…
It may be true as assumed by others, but I don't. I believe that if you have strong determination and perseverance, the success will certainly come to you in the end.
34. 从此之后?我已发现…
Ever since then, I have found that子句
例∶从此之后?我已发现…
Ever since then, I have found smile the best way to avoid any possible conflicts in our daily lives.
35. 这样说来?假如...?当然毫无疑问地…。
In this light, if…, there can surely be no doubt (that) 子句
例∶这样说来?假如我们能善用时间?当然毫无疑问地我们会成功。
In this light, if we can make good use of time, there can surely be no doubt that we will get somewhere.
36. 更严重的是?…。
What is more serious is (that)子句
例∶更严重的是?我们不珍惜野生动物。
What is more serious is that we do not cherish the wildlife.
37. 鉴于社会的实际需要?…。
In view of the practical need of society, ….
例∶鉴于社会的实际需要?愈来愈多人对学英语有兴趣。
In view of the practical need of society, there are more and more people interested in learning English.
III. 用于文章结论句
38. 如果能实践这三点?…。
If one can really put the three points into action (practice), …
例∶如果能实践这三点?…。
If one can really put the three points into action(practice), he will surely be able to live a healthy and happy life.
39. 做这些简单之事?我们一定可以…。
By doing these simple things, we surely can ….
例∶做这些简单之事?我们一定可以快乐出门平安回家。
By doing these simple things, we surely can go out of the door happily and come back home safe every day.
40. 如此?我相信…。
In this way, I believe (that)子句
例∶如此?我相信大家能够像我一样?享受乘坐公车的乐趣。
In this way, I believe that all the people may be able to enjoy the bus ride like me.
41. 实践这些?…。
By putting them (the above) into practice, ….
例∶实践这些?在智育方面我一直能不断进步。
By putting them(the above) into practice, I have been able to make constant progress in intellectual education.
42. (A) 唯有符合此三项要求?我们才能…。
Only by living up to the three requirements, can we ….
(B) 唯有通力合作?我们才能…。
Only with combined efforts, can we ….
例∶唯有通力合作?我们才能期望台湾不久有新的面貌。
Only with combined efforts, can we expect Taiwan to take a new face in due course.
43. 最后?但并非最不重要?…。
Last but no least, ….
例∶最后?但并非最不重要?教育上的缺失是助长青少年犯罪的原因。
Last but no least, the shortcoming in education is the cause contributing to juvenile delinquency.
44. 这证据显示～的重要性在怎么强调都不为过。
This evidence shows that the importance of ～ cannot be overemphasized.
例∶这证据显示交通安全的重要性在怎么强调都不为过。
This evidence shows that the importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized.
45. 由于这些理由?我…。
For these reasons, I ….
例∶由于这些理由?我认为在台湾接受大学教育是明智的。
For these reasons, I think that receiving college education in Taiwan is wise.
46. 总而言之?…。
In conclusion, …
= To sum up, …
例∶总而言之?好国民应该遵守交通规则。
In conclusion, a good citizen should abide by traffic regulations.
47. 因此?我们能下个结论?那就是…。
We can, therefore, come to the conclusion (that)子句
例∶因此?我们能下个结论?那就是世上自由罪珍贵。
We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as freedom in the world.
48. 如果我们能做到如上所述?毫无疑问地?…。
If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt (that)子句
例∶如果我们能做到如上所述?毫无疑问地?我们就能精通英语。
If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt that we can master English
49. 因此?这就是…的原因。
Thus, this is the reason why ….
例∶因此?这就是我重感冒的原因。
Thus, this is the reason why I caught a bad cold.
50. 所以?我们应该了解…。
Therefore, we should realize (that)子句
例∶所以?我们应该了解学英文不能没有字典。
Therefore, we should realize that in learning English we cannot do without a dictionary.
51. 因此?由上列的讨论我们可以明了…。
We, therefore, can make clear from the above discussion (that)子句
例∶因此?由上列的讨论我们可以明了毅力可以克服任何困难。
We, therefore, can make clear from the above discussion that perseverance can overcome any difficulty.
52. 1. 从～观点来看?…。 From the ～ point of view, ….
2. 根据～的看法?…。 According to ～ point of view, ….
例∶从政治的观点来看?这是一个很复杂的问题。
From the political point