英语作文《the key to success》？

Hard work is the key to success

Everyone wishes to be successful in life, but what's successful ?

for me happiness is the ultimate successful, do anything as you wish, do anyting i want to do, and sleep when i am tired. get up at the time i want get up is the happiness to me.

I have been ordered to write a peice of essay of "Hard work is the key to success". i strongest against this opinion acturally.

life is life, working is just a part of life, it could be fun, but never if it goes a "hard" way.
and belive me, hard work is the loser's life, never mean to be happy.

the key to success
成功的关键
Everyone wishes to be successful in life. While discussing this, we must bear in mind the following three principles diligence, deyotion and perseverance.
每个人都想在生活中获得成功。在讨论这个，我们必须牢记以下三个原则的勤奋和毅力，deyotion。
The first key factor to success is diligence. If we waste time, our future life will be a failure.If we are diligent now, we will surely be successful in the future.
成功的第一要素是勤奋。如果我们浪费时间，我们未来的生活将是失败的。如果我们现在勤奋，我们的未来一定会成功的。
Devotion,which means the concentration of our mind and effort in doing things,is another key factor to success. Whanever job we are doing,we must love it and do it whole-heartedly. Only when we set our minds on the joban we do it well.
奉献，这意味着在做的事情，集中精力努力是成功的另一个关键因素。whanever工作我们正在做的，我们必须爱它，全心全意地做这件事。只有当我们全身心投入，我们做的很好的常磐。
Furthermore, perseverance or a strong will is also necessary in order to make success a certainly. If we study or work day after day, there is nothing that can not be achieved. Whitout a strong will, on the other hand, we are likely to give up when we meet some difficulties. In short a strong will can urge a person to perform wonderful deeds.
此外，毅力和坚强的意志是必要的为了使成功的保证。如果我们坚持每天学习或工作，没有什么是不能实现的。由于强烈的意志，另一方面，我们很可能会放弃我们遇到636f70797a64362困难的时候。总之一个坚强的意志可以促使人表演精彩的事迹。
To conclude, all great men achieve success through diligence, devotion and perservance. Just as a famous English saying goes：“No pains, no gains”.
总之，所有的伟人都是通过勤奋，奉献精神和毅力。正如著名的英语谚语所说：“没有付出，就没有收获”。